critique wanted How good is my drawing of Twilight?

[EverEverOn 346]

 

Yesterday I drew this drawing of Twilight, and was wondering how good it was in terms of proportion and what I could do to make it better. 

Basically what I did was sketch the drawing out in pencil, outline it with pen, then color it with colored pencils.

[redshell 195]

It's really good all I can say the back of the mane isn't long enough

[Moony the Cat 3,697]

Well, the drawing looks pretty cute and the coloring is alright. 

For me, her left front leg just looks a little short. 

[FlyingChicken 154]

The eyes are a bit off especially the right one (my right as I look into the picture), but overall it was pretty good. 

[Sporemane 545]

Her right eye looks weird the top of the eye should be more curved than pointy

[KawaiiShy 89]

She looks a little lopsided but that might just be me.   You got the coloring spot on though. 

[CookieK 74]

The back of her mane needs to be longer and a bit bigger plus the tail needs to have that little bit that's cut out of it to make it match her mane,but besides that and the few things other people mentioned it looks pretty good. 

Edited November 25, 2015 by CookieK

[Snake 515]

She's really cute! I can point out a few things you could work on though! For one, her back mane should be a bit longer. Her head is also a little wonky shaped, as well as her eye!
She still looks really cute though!
(Twi is best pone)

[Wicked Funky 2,955]

@,

 

The style looks alot like Animated James

 

In terms of feedback though, The back of the mane isn't long enough and you need to get more pen control. Overall, A nice drawing.

 

Just noticed that the leg she's holding up is a tad too short, And in my opinion the ear is a bit too round but that is more of a style choice, Still a very nice drawing

Edited November 25, 2015 by Gentleman Cruki

[simba86 1,541]

body is good but i think the head needs some work

[Pinkiest Pie 405]

The eyes are a bit too big for eachother, other than that it is great!

[Kenshiro 13,492]

Hello There. Its very cute and beautiful art. I think you can work on eye and mane details. I love Twiligiht's scarf by the way '''

[Everleaf 541]

The eyes seem a little off and her mane/tail are a little short!  Other than that it's pretty well done.

[Voseerie 28]

Hi!! 
I took everyones suggestions and put it all into a redline for you, Its easier when you can see it
Your body and pose is awesome, youve done really well, especially the back legs, i could never 
get the shows style legs right; So kudos to you

Hopefully the redline helps