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"Psst... hey! Symphony, wake up!" Said Kandy. "Go back to sleep, Kandy. Whatever it is, it can wait..." "NO! It can't wait! Sunset is not in her bed!" Symphony woke up quickly, asking: "what do you mean by 'not in bed'?" "Mom and dad wouldn't believe me, but as I pass by her room at night, I usually hear her snoring. Today everything was quiet, and as I checked... NOTHING!"

That night, my search after my little sister has begin.

 

-Years later-

 

"Good morning, Symphony. You woke up to a nice day of summer." Kandy said. Symphony smiled at her as she went into the kitchen. "Your mane looks amazing today, have you done something to it?" Kandy asked. "Why are you so kind? You're usually pretty grumpy when it's morning." Symphony replied. "Well, I was wondering if you know what your best friend thinks about me."

"Kandy, enough, I'm not telling you if Note has a crush on you." Symphony replied. "Well, I guess you can make breakfast on your own. By the way, the eggs are gone." Kandy simply replied. Symphony rolled her eyes and said: "I'll just go get some eggs, then." She took her stuff and left the house, and Kandy was disappointed; she was hoping that Symphony will tell her. "That Kandy... I wish she never met Note, she keeps asking about him." Symphony said to herself. She was so annoyed at Kandy that she bumped into another pony. "I'm really sorry, miss, we just heard that the sirens were defeated long ago by our hero, princess Twilight." He said. Symphony asked: "who are the sirens?" "I've got no time to lose, I must run. The heroes we should thank them are Twilight Sparkle and... that Sunset!" He said as he ran. 'Sunset? Could it be my little sister?'

'Wa-wait! Sunset what?!" Symphony yelled, but she got no response. She ran across the town, looking for someone who knows more about the event. No one really knew who is that Sunset, and some were surprised to hear that the sirens still exist. She ran for 15 minutes without getting any answers, until she bumped into somepony again- but this time, it looks like luck was on her side.

 

"Princess Twilight... I'm so sorry." She said. "You don't look good, why won't you rest for a minute?" "I'm sorry, Twilight, but I can't. You are the one who has answers, you are the one who might know where my sister is. Her name is Sunset Shimmer, and if you really care, I really need to know where she is. I want to see her."

"I do know where she is." Twilight replied. A spark of happiness was lit in Symphony's eyes, but then Twilight said: "but I can't let you access her, it's a secret that is better to be hidden."

"But Twilight, I'm getting married in two weeks. I really want my youngest sister to be there, especially after all of these years." "I'm really sorry. It's better for me to leave, so I won't cause any sadness. Altough Twilight said no, Symphony had a plan. "I thank you for your time. Please, I want you to have something." Symphony said. She took out an invitation from her bag, and topped it with a little bit of tracking dust when Twilight couldn't notice. "If you ever see her, I want you to give her this." Symphony gave Twilight an invitation for her wedding, and Twilight left. Symphony ran back home.

 

The door was opened, and Symphony stormed inside. "Have you brought any eggs?"

"Forget the eggs, Kandy! I'm going to return Sunset back home." Symphony said proudly.

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The concept of Sunset Shimmer having sisters is an interesting one.

 

If I may offer some feedback, your tenses seemed to shift around a little in your intro ("has begin" should be "had begun"), and it's best if you start a new paragraph every time a new character talks, to make it less confusing.

 

Hope to read more soon. :)

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