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Meet Pwincess Baby Cuddle Heart (AKA Cuddleshy)


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Name: Cuddle Heart (aka Cuddleshy; The Cursed Angel)

 

Age: 22 (cursed of immortality over 3000 years ago)

 

Relationship: Princess Platinum (Mother)

 

Cutie Mark: cursed to be unseen

 

Powers: Low Level Unicorn Magic, Type 4: Angelic Magic, Type 7 Angelic Strength (when enraged)

 

Personality: Generally scared and shy but when she warms up to others she....um "acts her age".

 

History: Born as a pegasus from the royal unicorn family, cuddle heart was treated like a servant and later banished at age 3 during the last  months of the great blizzard. She accidentally stumbles into a unicorn colt known as sombra who decides to curse her with immortality as well to forever wear foals attire for eternity and was casted near what is known as now the Crystal Empire but before she could reach help, she fell through the ice and lost a wing and froze there and no one to save her. Millenniums she finally gave up hope and anger enraged her to turn into a beast and break through. She launched into the air and landed into tartarus and scared a three headed dog (#oopsihopethatwasntimportant). Later she regained her originally form and walked to a small town of Ponyville who never saw such a site of an adult mare with no cutie mark and wearing foalish clothing. Soon ponies were concern of their children and ousted her out. The harassment surged through and once again changed her  into her beast form and went into the Everfree to nearly wiping out the Timberwolves from existence. The next day, the  main six decides to investigate a fire that appeared in the everfree only to find burnt timber and a mare who was covered in ash and splinters. After discovering her past Twilight decides to bring Cuddle Heart to the other Princesses. They all judged her and though she had dark energy, they all sought that with training, she can control it with proper guidance and over the first two years she became the Princesses' Apprentice and was given title as princess but decided to open up the first Adult Foal shop after discovering that there were those who liked what she did not see she had all along. She later found herself enjoying the comfort and began a chain of stores in big cities  and one in Ponyville.

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i sense promise in this oc, so i shall give critiq

her age should be set younder or older as 22 gives an impression of maturity in ponies, while much older or younger beings are shown to have childish outbursts.

 

a broken horn would better explain the outbursts of rage that turn her into a beast, as magic can be warped.

 

the history you have written should be a backstory, her history should be a brief sum of that.

 

while it is fine that she goes into rage, there should be an actual trigger to her emotion that is tied to her little "adventure".

 

The beast should have several levels of intensity, each adding onto the design. The picture of the beast you posted should be the sanity shattering final form, when a friend dies or something overly tragic happens. However comma, this should only happen once as to show it absolute destructive power behind it, as well as it ultimately destroys her body.

 

her dark magic should be limited and would cause major amounts of pain across her curse mark

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