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Hehe, it looks like Rainbow Dash isn't really happy with her clothes haha  :P Maybe she shouldn't have went to Macy's ^_^

 

Hey guys! I've drawn a pic of Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash in their suits and man do they look awesome! :D I'll be finishing this drawing by coloring it in photoshop which I'll be uploading the final picture on deviantart and here on the forums! :)

I was given inspiration to draw this picture from another great artist on deviantart, "0Bluse". I loved Rainbow Dash's facial expression in his artwork here and I just wanted to draw that same expression she had hehe http://0bluse.deviantart.com/art/MLP-Fight-516727522(I think I'll be planning to draw a wrestling pic as well lol)

Be sure to check him out! His artwork is amazing! :D

But I also want to know what you guys think of the drawing. Please do share your opinions on it! :)

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PHOTOSHOP VERSION

 

(03/18/16) 3 DAYS LATER (Still In Progress :P):

 

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I've changed the hair a bit so I could correct it's positioning. Also, I'll be adding a lot of lighting detail to her hair soon! ^_^

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Wow, you're really skilled at this. The amount of detail in the shirt seems a little greater than the cartoony-ness of RD, which is definitely an eye-catcher for me, but I think it's still a great piece of work.

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First off I'd like to mention how awesome the suit looks.

 

You seem to be using white and black (or something close to it) to shade your picture, and I think it'd look much better if you use color instead. For example, check this out:

 

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Things look much better the more color you add into your shading.  :P

 

Here's a good guide for using color: http://glitchedpuppet.deviantart.com/art/How-I-See-Color-A-Tutorial-184642625

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