Horse Friend (Electro-Accordian)

[BlueBrony 388]

Presenting the most heartfelt electro-accordian song ever. If for some strange reason you want a download, head over to ponyfm to get it(https://pony.fm/tracks/21614-horse-friend)

Edited April 1, 2016 by BlueBrony

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Fourth wall breaks for the win!

 

Good chord progressions, though it kinda sounds choppy going from the I to the flat major VII since it's going back and forth. Why not add the flat major VII to smooth things out. Also, I see you've done reverse accenting, meaning you've got accents on beat "and" (the upbeat) on the accordion. 

 

Nice electronic build-up, though the percussion could use a little depth when it comes to EQing. 

 

As for your vocals, great character. The fourth wall breaks and the stuffing of lyrics in a section really give it that Pinkie Pie feel to it. Just make sure that when you do those long exaggerated inhales, don't be so close to the mic because you may peak it. Your singing is very smooth, and it actually has a broadway feel! Big thumbs up there. 

 

All in all, great track. It could just use some tweaks here and there.

[BlueBrony 388]

Thanks, this was something I literally just threw together at the last minute  

 

 

Good chord progressions, though it kinda sounds choppy going from the I to the flat major VII since it's going back and forth. Why not add the flat major VII to smooth things out.

I'm afraid i don't quite understand what you are saying, perhaps there was a typo?

 

 

 

As for your vocals, great character. The fourth wall breaks and the stuffing of lyrics in a section really give it that Pinkie Pie feel to it. Just make sure that when you do those long exaggerated inhales, don't be so close to the mic because you may peak it. Your singing is very smooth, and it actually has a broadway feel! Big thumbs up there.

 

Thanks, I've been working a lot on my vocals lately. It's hard to stay consistent because my mic picks up literally everything!

 

I  make it a personal goal to become at least a little better at one or two things for every song that I make. Thanks for the feedback!

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Thanks, this was something I literally just threw together at the last minute

 

 

I'm afraid i don't quite understand what you are saying, perhaps there was a typo?

 

 

 

 

Thanks, I've been working a lot on my vocals lately. It's hard to stay consistent because my mic picks up literally everything!

 

I  make it a personal goal to become at least a little better at one or two things for every song that I make. Thanks for the feedback!

 

Oh my bad on the typo. I meant the flat major VI. Do you need me to go deeper into this?

 

And no prob!