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New story idea, would like feedback


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On her first day as a full Wonderbolt, Rainbow Dash begins to worry that her new job will affect her free time, friendships, and relationship with her pet. Hoping to clear her mind and forget her worries, she confides in her co-Captain, close friend and secret crush, Soarin.

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It's not a bad idea. Nor a good one. A - what I would consider - underdeveloped one.

 

I'd say sure, go for it, it'd probably be good for a oneshot or something. Too little substance or potential conflict to make it go for a longer time, if it were to be based solely on what you described here.

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