writing "Eternity"

[4HFan 476]

Hello everypony! Recently, I discovered that writing songs is a great way to express yourself and helps with feelings that are hard to deal with. So here's my lyrical adaptation of "Millennia", by Crown the Empire. I call it, "Eternity". (Real original huh)

 

 

"Eternity"

 

Hey there old friend,

 

I know it broke your heart when you watched me go,

 

And I know young love is just a dream,

 

I was only fifteen,

 

And you're the only love I've known.

 

But please don't let me go, I'm not done,

 

'Cause it's loss that kills my heart.

 

Don't give up on me, kindle the spark.

 

 

I've been away from this place for what feels like eternity,

 

Lost, alone, and broken down inside,

 

All I ever wanted was a real home,

 

So please don't let me go!

 

I never wanted to feel this way,

 

All the pain just won't seem to go away,

 

I'll lie awake here in my room,

 

Then pull the trigger and send myself home.

 

 

So how did I get so far from my happy days?

 

Another broken dream now just a memory,

 

I should've stayed here in the dark,

 

I should've left this awesome place,

 

And never learned how to love.

 

 

So please just tell my now about the things that you regret,

 

Now that I'll be dead and gone and done,

 

Please don't leave me here!

 

And leave my heart, here in the gutter.

 

 

I've been away from this place for what feels like eternity,

 

Lost, alone, and broken down inside,

 

All I ever wanted was a real home,

 

So please don't let me go!

 

I never wanted to feel this way,

 

All the pain just won't seem to go away,

 

I'll lie awake here in my room,

 

Then pull the trigger and send myself home.

 

(Send myself home!)

 

I've been away from this place for what feels like eternity,

 

Lost, alone, and broken down inside,

 

All I ever wanted was a real home,

 

So please don't let me go!

 

I never wanted to feel this way,

 

All the pain just won't seem to go away,

 

I'll lie awake here in my room,

 

Then pull the trigger and send myself...

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Well written and I was happy to read it.