crossover The Neon Vale - [SAMPLE]

[Bronies of Las Vegas 47]

Hello! Two members of the team have gotten together to write a fan-fiction presenting the advanced society (future) of Las Pegasus. A city of crime lying under the blanket of stereotypes among races that seemingly cause irrevocable trouble. Empires rise as fast as the crime rate within Ridgee's hometown as he provides information as a member of the Las Pegasus Task Force, and bringing appropriate justice.

 

Note: The actual story contains profanity. Although we are somewhat allowed to use slang within the mlpforum, we find it uncivil to do so. Here is a clean copy, brief and cut out from the dark action, and gives you an idea of what this story is about. (UNDERGOING EDITING & ADDITIONS).

 

LINK: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7Ac3sx_1Cd2Y0U1V2pzMWZHLTA/view?usp=sharing

 

What do we need to work on? What would you expect from us?

 

Status: Nervous

[Regal Shadow 825]

Wow! You're an excellent writer! Great job!

[Bronies of Las Vegas 47]

Thank you! It was an effort from a team of two, and it is well appreciated! Sorry for the late reply as much has been happening.