[Fan Fiction] Regrets

[Shagbark 15]

I have a bunch of short stories up under Pony Tales, but the riskiest one, which I'd most like to hear what people think of, is "No Regrets". It's a first-person Twilight story in which, at the end of her life, she thinks back on her obsession with her study and her work, and what it cost her.

 

(This thread is called "Regrets" because Twilight Yagami already started a thread called "No Regrets", and the story is about regrets anyway.)