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Andy feelin

Przewalski's Ponies - (My Life as a) Teenage Wonderbolt

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Hi! We're Przewalski's Ponies, and some of you might already know us for we seem to be the first and the oldest active brony rock band ever. True or not, we have been creating pony-related (and some unrelated) music for 5 years and here is our latest studio release:

 

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Very nice!

 

Very well written lyrics. Loved how you showed how the young wonderbolt started on the bottom and proclaimed he will rise. That's the type of story driven lyrics I like. Some individual lines were a little cheesy though. Watch out for that as those cheesy lines can be a distraction.

 

I absolutely love the light ballad feel you put on this piece. Your harmonies were spot on. I do suggest more use of vibrato on longer notes though for more expression. The male vocalist did sound a little nasally in the beginning but it sounded like he cleared up as the song progressed. The build up in intensity was great. It fit perfectly with the theme of the song.

 

All in all great work, but it could use some tweaks here and there.

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It's been 3 years and I still like that song. :darling:

In my opinion it's the best song you've made so far, definitely my favorite. :P

I like the visuals and everything, well done! :grin:

 

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