fanfic help

[djdashie3 128]

so i am makeing a fanfic and i am done wih the first chapter I just need some pony

to give it a read first before I post it I will pm the fanfic 

[icyfire 433]

I would be up to it if you would like. I am comfortable proof-reading and editing if that is what you need.

Edited January 4, 2017 by icyfire888

[djdashie3 128]

I would be up to it if you would like. I am comfortable proof-reading and editing if that is what you need.

 

cool thanks I will pm it too you! and when your done reading it tell me what you think

[icyfire 433]

cool thanks I will pm it too you! and when your done reading it tell me what you think

No problem. Awesome! I look forward to reading it.

[Hazard Time 1,127]

If you want a second opinion, I'd be open, as well.