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critique wanted An Idea: Lesson Zero Alternate Ending


NomadSpellbrush

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Hey, I've actually never been to this part of the forums before, so I'm not sure if this belongs here.

Hey, I've had this Idea for a fanfic for sometime now, and Have been ironing and fleshing it out for almost 2 years now. It's placeholder name is Locked up and it's an alternate ending to Lesson Zero where Celestia returns to Twilight's Library and has her arrested and sentenced to 3 years in a mares prison where she is cut off from spike and the rest of the mane 6 while her parents and shining armor are heart broken and can't get over the fact that Twilight is now a convict serving time in a harsh environment

If you want more info, heres a link to one of my DA galleries: http://spellboundcanvas.deviantart.com/gallery/62634133/Locked-Up-Fanfic

Tell me what you think.

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8 minutes ago, Turquoise Tomorrow said:

 

I think that wouldn't be canon in the show, plus it's for little girls..

 

I mean, I agree with this, but it really doesn't suit little girls watching it. But if MLP was an adult show, this would be a good idea. I still like it though!

 

Of Course it wouldn't be canon, that's not what I was aiming for. 

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