original character My first oc! Pls comment.

[Mystic Glow 32]

Hi,

Please give me feedback on my first oc's (Mystic Glow) !

I'm still thinking of a back story. I would greatly appreciate it if someone gave me a suggestion.

By the way, she was originally a unicorn, but turns to an alicorn.

Hope u like it!

Edited June 3, 2017 by Mystic Glow

[Telferi 6,905]

I really like the way she is designed x3

Your art is so cute, i love it! :3

[LordSwinton 759]

She has lovely colours 

[Cl0udChaser 3,006]

Awesome pictures. Keep it up.

[Meson Bolt 2,647]

I appreciate the color palette. A green-eyed pink OC is easy to muck up, but the colors you've chosen blend very well together and aren't too harsh on the eyes. Well done.

[Bronyfordays 401]

Awesomeness in a basket right there, in other words, I like it.

[ReverieRiver 525]

Very pretty! I love the colors

[Storm 199]

I think the colors go well together. I love the name too. Talent is magic I'm guessing? Remember to not make her too OP ^^
 

[jorge123esp 912]

Very cute OC . I really like it 

[Victoria Sponge 1,014]

She looks great; good colours a nice unique mane style and cute eyes too. I approve  

Edited May 31, 2017 by Battenberg

[Fluttershy Friend 25,445]

Not so much colours. I like it. Very cute OC!

[Shadow Beam 1,179]

Hello @Mystic Glow

Taking into account that you seem to be requesting advice/feedback regarding your newly created OC rather than the pieces themselves, I believe this topic would be more suitable for Original Character Help.

She's truly endearing, by the way. Great work. ^^

[Nightlara Singer 9]

I like her and the colors but i have a question. Is she a unicorn or an alicorn? because one of the pics show her with both the horn and wing but int the others she only has the horn.

Edited June 1, 2017 by Nightlara Singer

[Mystic Glow 32]

Oh yes,

She was originally a unicorn, but turned into an alicorn.

 

[Silent_Identity 4]

I do have to say that your character needs a backstory, like how they became an alicorn and possibly their ambitions before and after, but then again I'm new to this website so who knows.

I'm also wondering why you would choose to make her an alicorn at such a young age, it is quite the responsibility, also, who is that friend of hers?

Edited August 5, 2017 by Silent_Identity