feedback Story idea, need help please

[ggg-2 3,550]

Shortly after transferring to CHS from Crystal Prep, Twilight meets her first CHS student beyond the humane 6 and Flash in the form of Big Mac Apple, who happens to be the second largest student in school, who soon invites her to the farm to meet his family. Twilight soon sets her mind to learning more about this quiet teenage giant. I already have a title: "Muscles of Steel, Heart of Gold"

Edited June 10, 2017 by ggg-2

[Valeska 184]

What kind of help do you need? You just gave us a synopsis for your story but didn't actually ask any questions.