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adventure I wish…chapter1- the forbiden fruit


Wilson Lien

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Pancake and Flower are traveler. After long journey, they come to Sweet Apple Acres with their rage thirsty and hunger. Flower notices those juicy and tasty apples in farm.

 “Hmm…why don’t we steal some apples?” says Flower.

 “What!!? Isn’t it is illegal? We would be as bad as fruit bat!!!” says Pancake.

“Well maybe…but someday will be more apples…”says Flower.

After a while silence, seems even Pancake can’t tolerate the charm of apples…

“OK…but let’s be careful ,I don’t want to be caught.” says Pancake.

 

Pancake teleports herself on the apple tree and looks at those shining apples. Flower stretches her wing, fly up and sit next to Pancake.

“Wow…I sure is perfect time for harvest” says Pancake.

 

Pancake pick up an apple and bite it.

“Umm…yummy…Why don’t you take some, Flower?” says Pancake.

 

Pancake gives a new apple to Flower. Flower bite the apple and has a great idea flashing through her mind.

Flower starts to steal those apples and hide them inside her flurry mane.

“You not going to sell them, don’t you?” jokes Pancake.

 

“Why not? I think we can get some money!!!” says Flower.

 

“But the owner would be mad if we steal so many apples…” worries Pancake.

 

Suddenly, Apple Jack notice them and yell at them.

“What are you two up there for!? Get down!!, ya’ll terrible buzzes!!!”yells Apple Jack.

 

“Oh no! Hide!” says panic Flower.

 

“Ohh!!!” says Pancake.

 

Flower hide herself into leafs, and Pancake is too scared to move at the moment, so Flower grab her in leafs with her.

“I say get down!!! Now!!!” yells Apple Jack.

 

“Pancake, what we ganna do?” says Flower.

 

“IDK!!! It’s weird, I met Apple Jack before, she never be so angry before.” says Pancake.

 

Suddenly, Pancake slips and fall on her butt.”Owie!”

“Ha!!! That what you deserve!!! Thief!!!” laugh Apple Jack.

 

Flower fly down from the tree and pet Pancake.

“Uhh umm… We…Play hide and seek, we gonna go, sorry” lies Flower.

 

“Don’t fool me!!! I miss thousand tons of apples, and it must y’all stole it!!!” yells AJ.

 

“We don’t have any of your apples!!!” lies Flower.

 

“OK… if y’all not gonna say truth, I would beat it out of y’all!!!” AJ yells angrily, before Flower and Pancake notice, AJ hit Pancake with her back hooves.

 

Pancake is hit on trump and fall on the ground painfully.

“What wrong with you!!! OK,I got one of your precious apples!!!” Flower says, take one of apples from her mane and put it on the ground.” Here you go, now, Happy!!?”says Flower.

“No……..All of them!!!” yell Apple Jack.

 

Other apple family member notice the fight and come toward. Every member looks strange from they used to be. Apple Bloom is no longer filly but a mature pony. Big mac is now alicon. Miss Smith is as young as AJ.

 

“What happened, little sis?” asks Apple Bloom.

“Those thief stole our apples!!!” says AJ.

“I told you…we don’t have more!” offends Flower.

“You should be shame of y’allself!!!” judges Miss Smith.

“Yaaaap!!!” agrees Big Mac.

 

The situation start to lose control. Soon, apple family stand around Pancake and Flower and case stones at them with rage judge and swear. However, Flower still refuse to give up those apples, she still claims that all she have until….

 

“I’m sorrrrrrrry….” Pancake cry in fear and keeps apologizing.

“Here….” Flower sighs and shake her mane to let all the hidden apples fall on ground.

But the apples criticism doesn’t stop, and even get worse.

 

“No more excuse and apologize! Time to take you to the court of Friendship!!!” says AJ.

Then, The apples tie up Pancake and Flower. Big Mac use his magic carry them easily. On the way to the court of friendship, Pancake hide her face under her hooves to avoid yelling from ponies beside street. Although, only Flower notice that those pony are not yell at them but each other.

  Finally they arrive at a grandeur castle, the castle of friendship.

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