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Finesthour

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Words will never begin to say how sorry I am.

 

I stand before you a broken man.

 

I know I am not a perfect boyfriend...

 

But I try as hard as I can to keep you happy.

 

Fighting constantly has become a norm...

 

A norm I wish that did not exist.

 

I want to go back to the time we were happy...

 

The time where our only worry was when we couldn't talk to each other.

 

Our problems are becoming so huge...

 

But I want us to be able to get past them.

 

My heart is scared of being broken again.

 

The entire time at school today was filled with sobbing.

 

This was due to the idea of you leaving me for him.

 

The idea of this... it sends my heart into spasms of pain.

 

I sat and stared at your picture and cried.

 

I cried for the joy that would no longer exist.

 

I cried for the calls that would never be.

 

The endign of our time... it seemed so close.

 

I panicked...

 

My heart felt like it split into two.

 

I drew this after my pain became too great.

 

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This is the ammount of pain I have felt today...

 

I want us to be happy.

 

I will try all I can to keep us together.

 

No matter what the cost, I will never stop fighting.

 

Until the end of my fighting breath.

 

Which I hope is not any time soon.

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I know how you feel.

 

Just know, you have our simpathy.

 

And as long as you keep fighting, it'll be worth it.

Even if you lose her.

 

Because deep down, you know you did everything you could.

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I know how you feel.

 

Just know, you have our simpathy.

 

And as long as you keep fighting, it'll be worth it.

Even if you lose her.

 

Because deep down, you know you did everything you could.

 

We're still together. Lol.

Editing your post. Crafty x3

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Sorry, like most people on the internet I post before reading.

 

Still, I saved myself, didn't I?

 

Yes, yes you did xD

 

Although I'm not surprised you said that because of the pictures.

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You've got some talent there, old boy.

 

Hopefully, you'll be able to put it to good use before your death, unlike all the famous poets I ever knew.

 

Then again, my poetry knowledge is limited.

 

I'm 15 .-.

I have no need to try and get my stuff known xD

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Although I haven't been in such a situation, I still sympathise and hope that things get better for you.

 

Since there's not much I can do here, have this:

 

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