critique wanted Audio Drama Auditions

[Sky Art 0]

I'm having art auditions for my audio drama "Shadows of the Sun" If you or anyone else you know wants to audition Send in 2 pieces of your art with backgrounds to Skyartaudiodrama@gmail.com Name the file Art audition. If you pass you will need a Skype or Hangouts where ill keep in touch :). PS. Your art don't have to be perfect or the best. 

Audio Drama Info
Genre - Fantasy/Romance (its a love story) 
Plot - Long ago before Luna and Celestia ruled, Equestria was ruled by a beautiful Empress. Her name was Empress Aaleahya. The ponies believed her to be the creator of the sun and universe. She was bestowed many gifts. The necklace she wore around her neck gave her the power of gods. She had many enemies that would try to take this power. These enemies lived in the border lands where they are ruled by a darker power, a queen named Elphina...
When a unexpected pony tries to take the necklace will he follow through, or have a change of heart