Peaceful Sanctuary(orchestral)

[Ocean Melody 116]

 

Sometimes you need nothing more than just to relax and enjoy the moment and your surroundings

Decided to do another orchestral piece. Hope you enjoy and as always feedback welcomed.

https://pony.fm/tracks/36208-peaceful-sanctuary

[BlueBrony 388]

You did indeed provide the relaxingness. I think your composition could use a little more structure to your chords and a stronger melody line. It sounds pretty, but I don't hardly remember what it sounded like after hearing it, and I wouldn't be able to hum or whistle along with the melody. Crafting a memorable composition is quite difficult, and I think the best way to get better at it is to keep making music, so keep it up! You have good instincts as far as instrumentation goes, you just need to keep honing your craft.

[Ocean Melody 116]

On 1/11/2018 at 11:31 PM, BlueBrony said:

You did indeed provide the relaxingness. I think your composition could use a little more structure to your chords and a stronger melody line. It sounds pretty, but I don't hardly remember what it sounded like after hearing it, and I wouldn't be able to hum or whistle along with the melody. Crafting a memorable composition is quite difficult, and I think the best way to get better at it is to keep making music, so keep it up! You have good instincts as far as instrumentation goes, you just need to keep honing your craft.

Thanks for the feedback. Love your music btw.

[Vlazamal 338]

This is good Really good.