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This is a poem I wrote about my cat. It's meant to seem like it's about something else though. Read it and let me know what you think. 

-ChancelorPuddinghead

Mountain's Snow

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Your smile

Is so wide

Your hair

Is tangerine

If you're pretty

On the inside

Please tell me

‘Cause I don't know

I've never seen your true self show

 

I've seen the mountain’s snow

On the top of the hill cliff

And I've seen the endless drift of trees

Bright bright green

But I've never seen your heart

And where it's at right now

Is it sparkling white

Or is it black as hell?

 

The wind might knock me down sometimes

And you might pull me out of the night

My dreams become true

But I don't know if that's you

I want to see the sunlight

On the inside too

I wish I could just talk to you

 

 

 

 

This is a poem I wrote about bullying. Before you jump to conclusions, this poem is not about me. It doesn't matter who it's about. It just matters that I want people to stop bullying now. I hope you bronies are inspired by this poem.

Don't Need Sin

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I can't stand them

I can't stand their ways!

Their words hurt like ice,

Their eyes blazing fire,

Somehow that's what everyone admires.

They push and they shove

Until they get what they need.

They're never gonna get it.

They can't achieve

Greatness

If that's how they believe

They'll win.

By hurting the ones

Who carry what they want,

But not what they need.

They don't need sin.

 

The bullies got hurt once

They know how it feels,

They were the bullied,

They should know better

Than to make deals

With the devil himself.

 

So leave us alone!

We shout,

As we soar towards the stars,

We can't hear their roars anymore.

Our hearts heal like a bandage heals our skin,

We don't let them creep back in.

 

 

 

Hey bronies, before you read this, keep in mind that this is not how I think at all. I wrote it in a different person's perspective. I really hope you like this poem!

Meaningless

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Meaningless happiness

On Valentines day

The world so joyful

Their love will come

Everything's okay

That's what they say

 

Meaningless hearts

So naive

They'll give cards to their universe

And light up the stars

Oh how wrong they'll be

 

Meaningless world

The stars will fade

Or run away

Faster than the world can catch up

And tell the stars hiding in the trees

“I love you, happy Valentines Day!”

 

Everything we touch

With love brings hate

To this treacherous Valentine's Day

 

Hearts get broken

The world does too

Happiness won't last

We all fall through

The cracks of the edges of the

Rollercoaster called love

It makes me sick to my stomach

Just thinking of

 

Valentine's day

Does not equal love

You solve the equation

To get heart breaks

Meaningless, meaningless Valentine's Day.

 

 

Hey! In short, this poem is about me and how I have so many ideas in my head about what to write, but once I pick one thing out of my mind and onto the paper, I forget about the rest.

I really hope you liked it! Tell me what you think.

-ChancelorPuddinghead

What I'm There To Find

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I feel like my talent comes and goes

I jump in jump out

Of the universe as we know

But never get exactly what I'm there to find

 

I feel like it's repetitive bounce

Up and down up and down

It leaves the world for only a moment

Only for it to hit the ground

With no idea what direction it was starting to go

 

In the air

Wild eyes searching,

Grasping an idea

Brings it back to earth

But the atmosphere pushes it back up again

Into space, out of my mind

Never to be found

I never get what I'm there to find

 

New ideas start to come

And here the cycle repeats

Repeating for eternity

I never get what I'm there to find

The gravity pulls me down

Before I get a chance to turn it around

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Hello @Chancellor Puddinghead

As to avoid numerous topics from the same user being posted in a short span of time, your recent threads have been merged into one. Apologies for any inconvenience, and do keep up with your lovely work. ^^

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These are all great Pudding! (I'm starting to sound like a broken record here) Especially ones that are written from someone else's poit of view. Your works are wonderfully ambiguous. It tells something about your skills when your poems can be read in many different ways, like "Mountain Dew". I would never have guessed that it's about your cat. I'm glad that you added that clarification, it made the poem even better.

Somehow I was even seeing some political perspectives in "Don't need sin" when bullies want "greatness" and make "deals"... Of course that's just me overanalyzing things.

I really don't read poetry in any other language than my mother tongue. I'm surprised that from all of the places this, forums dedicated to animated ponies, is what changed that... :lol:

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13 hours ago, Divine plywood said:

These are all great Pudding! (I'm starting to sound like a broken record here) Especially ones that are written from someone else's poit of view. Your works are wonderfully ambiguous. It tells something about your skills when your poems can be read in many different ways, like "Mountain Dew". I would never have guessed that it's about your cat. I'm glad that you added that clarification, it made the poem even better.

Somehow I was even seeing some political perspectives in "Don't need sin" when bullies want "greatness" and make "deals"... Of course that's just me overanalyzing things.

I really don't read poetry in any other language than my mother tongue. I'm surprised that from all of the places this, forums dedicated to animated ponies, is what changed that... :lol:

Aww! Thanks. I'm glad you like them. I really enjoy writing poems that people can interpret in multiple ways. 

I think I can write a poem about almost anything. Sometimes I just write poems that aren't about anyone I know, and not about something I relate to either. I just try to find something that I think maybe would relate to a few people. The poem "Meaningless" I actually got the idea from the shows and movies. You know how someone breaks up with you and then you hate Valentine's day after that. I'm really wondering if other poets can write poems about stuff that doesn't relate to them at all... 

What I'm trying to say is if you have any ideas of what I should write about, I will try to write a poem about it. It would be better if the topic was deep. I'm better at those. 

And again, I'm really glad you like these poems. I'll post a few more today since I wrote a lot of poems this week. 

(I feel like pointing out that my cat is being cute right now 🐈)

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