Becoming Insane - Work In Progress

[RainbowDashie 767]

I made this so far and please leave idea's and/or critizism

 

 

BECOMING INSANE.

 

"Come get me if you want me," Pinkie said. "Oh you bet i'm coming." Baritone said then. Pinkie ran off in a dark corner in one of the streets of ponyville. "Here's Baritone" Baritone said. And then they started as a young couple alone. A bit later when they were done, they came out of the dark and got back to their own homes. On the way home Pinkie bumped into Fluttershy. "Oh. Sorry Pinkie i didn't mean to hat you. Are you ok?" "I'm super duper extra ok today." Pinkie answered.

"Are you sure? You look different"

"Yes i am very sure, i think?"

"Okay then, if you say so. Bye Pinkie."

And both ponies walked away. Not much later Pinkie saw Rainbow Dash. "Hi Dashie." She said. "Oh, hi Pink. Sup?"

"Nothing. Just walking home. What about you?"

"Practicing for the Wonderbolts. Are you okay? You look like... like... I dunno."

"I'm fine Dashie. Don't worry about me."

"Okay then. See you later Pinkie." And she dashed off.

"Bye"