Ocean Melody

Caring Heart (Orchestral)

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I don't know anything about music but it seems to suddenly go up and down which disrupts the flow. Maybe it's just because you're using software you're not used to yet. Keep at it and I'm sure you'll improve. There's always room for more musicians.

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It's a good listen. However, your strings are suffering from a nasty cut from the transition from one note to the next. Either run your strings through a compressor with sustain or add some reverb to make it transition smoothly. Your theme is good but it just needs more development. You can do this by either changing to the parallel major or relative major of C minor. 

All in all, good piece but it could use quite a bit of development. 

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