advanced The Good King (OOC)

[False Perception 482]

Does Sule have a brother?

[AnonyPoni 564]

Does Sule have a brother?

 

I never made one up, but probably not

 

Attention

 

I think you should post next. Let's imagine the Orb gave him limited power or somthing

[False Perception 482]

Oh, me post next. Kk.

[AnonyPoni 564]

Ach! I'm not good at the subtle hinting of Clover and Sule's romance.

 

Attention

 

Quoted form RP

 

midnight spat out some blood, "i lost my entire family that day," he shook his head, "i was born beacuse of magic, an experiment to see if it could be done, if they could send a spy of the malumais own, but was only loyal to the unicorns, pegasai and earth ponies, but then, i was tossed away when the experiment was banned, even if it was a success."

shiri blinked, none of this had been in his documents, it was said that he was born in the malumai capital hopsital, to a loving family, but when the doctors were "questioned", they didnt even know who he was, she knew something had been odd about him

 

Sounds real cool, but how are you going to work it into the story?

 

WERE DID THE OOC LINK GO ON THE RP?

 

Several hours later...

 

So...no one's posting?

 

You say that as if I mailed YOU about it anony. How crude. But he is just like me... And I think I get it now.

 

now we just have to wait for jade >.> thatll take forever X3

 

I'm not online 24-7, you know. <..<

 

I thought it was really good!

 

Quoted for attention

 

 

I hate to stay this, but SOMEPONY post please

[Jadefire 2,797]

Again, as I said, I'm not online 24-7. And a few hours without a post isn't going to kill this RP.

[AnonyPoni 564]

Again, as I said, I'm not online 24-7. And a few hours without a post isn't going to kill this RP.

 

I know...I just was bored

 

sorry if I annoyed you

Edited May 30, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[False Perception 482]

I believe I posted. And, Anony, Jade's right...summers a slow season for me, so I'm usually on more, though.

[AnonyPoni 564]

I believe I posted. And, Anony, Jade's right...summers a slow season for me, so I'm usually on more, though.

 

Sorry to you too

[False Perception 482]

Check the msg.

[Prince Midnight 817]

mabey tyrannus and co get the castle, before sule returns? X3

[Isobel 279]

I'm posting this from my iPod, I won't be able to post until 5:00pm tomorrow because I'm on vacation right now and can't post

[AnonyPoni 564]

mabey tyrannus and co get the castle, before sule returns? X3

 

sure, it would be a big suprise for him

[Prince Midnight 817]

sure, it would be a big suprise for him

 

also, ill somehow work the whole being created by magic somehow XD, i was improvising, X3,

[AnonyPoni 564]

Again, sorry everypony for annoying you into posting. This RP wouln't be here and this cool without you ponies. I really appreciate it.

[Prince Midnight 817]

Again, sorry everypony for annoying you into posting. This RP wouln't be here and this cool without you ponies. I really appreciate it.

 

hey your not annoying anypony X3, jade was with me XD, we were playing video games all day

[AnonyPoni 564]

Our Story So Far...

 

 

Sule is the Archon of the Malumai, but as with any power struggle, not everypony is happy about it. Armed rioters gather outside the Castle, demanding the old king back to power. With the Royal Guards outnumbered, they received reinforcements from Midnight Moon and his new recruits. However, they killed many rioters in the process. When Sule and Indigo go to criticize what Midnight had done, he brings up the point that the rioters shouldn't have been armed in the first place. Sule gives him the OK to assemble (not lead) an investigation team to find out who is supplying the weapons. Sal, the pony in charge of the investigation, bends the rules a bit to use Midnight as their inside pony. Midnight meets with the contact, and is taken to a camp were rebels are preparing for war. He meets with Shiri, a mysterious Non-Maluma who asks the former general if he wants to train her rebels. Among the items that Shiri gives him was a locket that acts like a mindcontrol device. He is unaware of what he has, and leaves to ponder the mission,

 

Back at the castle, Indigo and Sule prepare for the meeting with the Pegasi ambassador. She will be the one who gives her opinion on whether or not the Malumai may join the Pegasi in going to Equestria, a land where ponies can live in peace and harmony. Despite the fact the ambassador, Storm Comet, was more bubblier than they expected, she agreed with Sule's proposition. At that moment, the rebels started a siege of the castle. Indigo and the Guards take up arms and pepper spay, as does Midnight and his troops. When the castle was being defended, Sule believed that he could convince the rebels to stop if he threatened to kill the Old king, Tyrannus. He and Storm go down to the dungeon to get the Orb, Tyrannus' small prison. They take it back up and he yells to the rebels that he will kill the Tyrannus if they don't stop. They stop all in unison and all face him. Some rebels go up to chase him, and the battle resumes. Sule hands the Orb off to Indigo, who tries to keep it away from the Rebels. Sule flies back into the Castle and spots Midnight. When he asks about the ambassador, Midnight (under mind control) nearly kills Sule. Midnight regains his senses just before plunging the spear. Sule runs away, and finding Storm unharmed. The rebels retreat with little casualties on each side. After the battle is over, Midnight, freaked out by what he almost did, orders his troops to all take a family day. They may never see them again. When Sule goes to see Indigo, he realizes that he lost the Orb. Sule orders him and the Guards to go find him

 

Midnight tries to go home, but the locket Shiri gave him forces him to go to the rebel camp. There, Siri convinces Midnight that she can bring back his dead mate, Chrys. This was the final step in full mind control. Shiri tells Midnight to break the Orb and let Tyrannus take him over. Just as he nearly does it, Indigo and his team find find him. Sal pushes Midnight out of the way as the Orb breaks, and Tyrannus takes Sal over. Tyrannus wakes up and there is a fight between Indigo and Midnight. Indigo barely gets away and, with most of his ponies not making it out. When he gets back to the castle, he finds the Archon is no longer there.

 

Sule and Storm Comet left Chiroptera, the Malumai capital city, and traveled to Equestria to meet with Sule's old friend (and former lover) Clover the Clever. He needed to know a way to beat Tyrannus if he takes another host. She says they have to kill the host and use the Orb to suck up Tyrannus' soul. Hopefully, she can make another one...

 

 

This is my first RP, so I don't know what qualifies as a really good plot for one. But I think this one has gone beautifully and couldn't have gone better. What do you think?

Edited May 30, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Prince Midnight 817]

Our Story So Far...

 

 

Sule is the Archon of the Malumai, but as with any power struggle, not everyone is happy about it. Armed rioters gather outside the Castle, demanding the old king back to power. With the Royal Guards outnumbered, they received reinforcements from Midnight Moon and his new recruits. However, they killed many rioters in the process. When Sule and Indigo go to criticize what Midnight had done, he brings up the point that the rioters shouldn't have been armed in the first place. Sule gives him the OK to assemble (not lead) an investigation team to find out who is supplying the weapons. Sal, the pony in charge of the investigation, bends the rules a bit to use Midnight as their inside pony. Midnight meets with the contact, and is taken to a camp were rebels are preparing for war. He meets with Shiri, a mysterious Non-Maluma who asks the former general if he wants to train her rebels. Among the items that Shiri gives him was a locket that acts like a mindcontrol device. He is unaware of what he has, and leaves to ponder the mission,

 

Back at the castle, Indigo and Sule prepare for the meeting with the Pegasi ambassador. She will be the one who gives her opinion on whether or not the Malumai may join the Pegasi in going to Equestria, a land where ponies can live in peace and harmony. Despite the fact the ambassador, Storm Comet, was more bubblier than they expected, she agreed with Sule's proposition. At that moment, the rebels started a siege of the castle. Indigo and the Guards take up arms and pepper spay, as does Midnight and his troops. When the castle was being defended, Sule believed that he could convince the rebels to stop if he threatened to kill the Old king, Tyrannus. He and Storm go down to the dungeon to get the Orb, Tyrannus' small prison. They take it back up and he yells to the rebels that he will kill the Tyrannus if they don't stop. They stop all in unison and all face him. Some rebels go up to chase him, and the battle resumes. Sule hands the Orb off to Indigo, who tries to keep it away from the Rebels. Sule flies back into the Castle and spots Midnight. When he asks about the ambassador, Midnight (under mind control) nearly kills Sule. Midnight regains his senses just before plunging the spear. Sule runs away, and finding Storm unharmed. The rebels retreat with little casualties on each side. After the battle is over, Midnight, freaked out by what he almost did, orders his troops to all take a family day. They may never see them again. When Sule goes to see Indigo, he realizes that he lost the Orb. Sule orders him and the Guards to go find him

 

Midnight tries to go home, but the locket Shiri gave him forces him to go to the rebel camp. There, Siri convinces Midnight that she can bring back his dead mate, Chrys. This was the final step in full mind control. Shiri tells Midnight to break the Orb and let Tyrannus take him over. Just as he nearly does it, Indigo and his team find find him. Sal pushes Midnight out of the way as the Orb breaks, and Tyrannus takes Sal over. Tyrannus wakes up and there is a fight between Indigo and Midnight. Indigo barely gets away and, with most of his ponies not making it out. When he gets back to the castle, he finds the Archon is no longer there.

 

Sule and Storm Comet left Chiroptera, the Malumai capital city, and traveled to Equestria to meet with Sule's old friend (and former lover) Clover the Clever. He needed to know a way to beat Tyrannus if he takes another host. She says they have to kill the host and use the Orb to suck up Tyrannus' soul. Hopefully, she can make another one...

 

 

This is my first RP, so I don't know what qualifies as a really good plot for one. But I think this one has gone beautifully and couldn't have gone better. What do you think?

 

its gone well so far X3

[AnonyPoni 564]

its gone well so far X3

 

Would you say this RP is "20% cooler" than most RPs?

 

(I've been waiting to say that one)

[Prince Midnight 817]

Would you say this RP is "20% cooler" than most RPs?

 

(I've been waiting to say that one)

 

needs some....claibrations X3 (playin Mass effect 2)

[AnonyPoni 564]

Posted basically the worst post ever... somepony, go next and cover up the horror that is that post...

[Prince Midnight 817]

Posted basically the worst post ever... somepony, go next and cover up the horror that is that post...

 

it wasnt that bad XD, ive done worse

[Jadefire 2,797]

So, what's the bad guys' plans? Midnight takes over the castle, then Tyrannus et al come in with a regular army afterwards, now that the head of the chain of command is effectively cut off?

Edited May 31, 2012 by Jadefire

[Isobel 279]

Our Story So Far...

 

 

Sule is the Archon of the Malumai, but as with any power struggle, not everypony is happy about it. Armed rioters gather outside the Castle, demanding the old king back to power. With the Royal Guards outnumbered, they received reinforcements from Midnight Moon and his new recruits. However, they killed many rioters in the process. When Sule and Indigo go to criticize what Midnight had done, he brings up the point that the rioters shouldn't have been armed in the first place. Sule gives him the OK to assemble (not lead) an investigation team to find out who is supplying the weapons. Sal, the pony in charge of the investigation, bends the rules a bit to use Midnight as their inside pony. Midnight meets with the contact, and is taken to a camp were rebels are preparing for war. He meets with Shiri, a mysterious Non-Maluma who asks the former general if he wants to train her rebels. Among the items that Shiri gives him was a locket that acts like a mindcontrol device. He is unaware of what he has, and leaves to ponder the mission,

 

Back at the castle, Indigo and Sule prepare for the meeting with the Pegasi ambassador. She will be the one who gives her opinion on whether or not the Malumai may join the Pegasi in going to Equestria, a land where ponies can live in peace and harmony. Despite the fact the ambassador, Storm Comet, was more bubblier than they expected, she agreed with Sule's proposition. At that moment, the rebels started a siege of the castle. Indigo and the Guards take up arms and pepper spay, as does Midnight and his troops. When the castle was being defended, Sule believed that he could convince the rebels to stop if he threatened to kill the Old king, Tyrannus. He and Storm go down to the dungeon to get the Orb, Tyrannus' small prison. They take it back up and he yells to the rebels that he will kill the Tyrannus if they don't stop. They stop all in unison and all face him. Some rebels go up to chase him, and the battle resumes. Sule hands the Orb off to Indigo, who tries to keep it away from the Rebels. Sule flies back into the Castle and spots Midnight. When he asks about the ambassador, Midnight (under mind control) nearly kills Sule. Midnight regains his senses just before plunging the spear. Sule runs away, and finding Storm unharmed. The rebels retreat with little casualties on each side. After the battle is over, Midnight, freaked out by what he almost did, orders his troops to all take a family day. They may never see them again. When Sule goes to see Indigo, he realizes that he lost the Orb. Sule orders him and the Guards to go find him

 

Midnight tries to go home, but the locket Shiri gave him forces him to go to the rebel camp. There, Siri convinces Midnight that she can bring back his dead mate, Chrys. This was the final step in full mind control. Shiri tells Midnight to break the Orb and let Tyrannus take him over. Just as he nearly does it, Indigo and his team find find him. Sal pushes Midnight out of the way as the Orb breaks, and Tyrannus takes Sal over. Tyrannus wakes up and there is a fight between Indigo and Midnight. Indigo barely gets away and, with most of his ponies not making it out. When he gets back to the castle, he finds the Archon is no longer there.

 

Sule and Storm Comet left Chiroptera, the Malumai capital city, and traveled to Equestria to meet with Sule's old friend (and former lover) Clover the Clever. He needed to know a way to beat Tyrannus if he takes another host. She says they have to kill the host and use the Orb to suck up Tyrannus' soul. Hopefully, she can make another one...

 

 

This is my first RP, so I don't know what qualifies as a really good plot for one. But I think this one has gone beautifully and couldn't have gone better. What do you think?

 

That sounds like a summary for a novel or something O_O I love it <3

 

I'm on my iPod, so any of my posts will take like 15 minutes of typing, just warning you!

[AnonyPoni 564]

So, what's the bad guys' plans? Midnight takes over the castle, then Tyrannus et al come in with a regular army afterwards, now that the head of the chain of command is effectively cut off?

 

I guess... But will everypony be happy with his return (or even realizes he returned? since he is in Sal's body)

Edited May 31, 2012 by Anony-Brony

[Prince Midnight 817]

well, lets just say the malumai were actually getting used to the idea of peace, and im thinking when tyrannus took over sals body, he made a few changes, and all that jazz