Cider Contest 3.0: Special Zecora Edition

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

cuz then she'll call on fluttershy
who is not in the best form
to meet ponies new,she'll fly
away or totally transform

Fluttershy 2

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

As Applejack sips at number eighty two

"Winners circle, I am coming for you"

 

Aj=82

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

She'll be hootin' like an owl in a midsummer tree.

When ah've finished number eighty three

 

*glug glug glug*

*hooooot*

 

Aj=83

[ChB 18,532]

7 hours ago, lordvaltasar said:

Our brightest artist,Rarity meet
who paints with threads ribbons and silks
and all ponies her work seek
thats why she oppened three boutiques

Rarity 22
 

 

6 hours ago, lordvaltasar said:

like a swan,white and elegant
with a dark amethyst mane
and as for what marks her flank
three cerulean diamonds there

Rarity 23

 

6 hours ago, lordvaltasar said:

Narcisist some call her and,well..
she loves to take care of her image
but to know your worth and self
is great and never be discouraged

Rarity 24

I’m sorry, but I don’t think any of these rhyme. 

Rarity is still at 22. 

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

9 minutes ago, ChB said:

 

 

I’m sorry, but I don’t think any of these rhyme. 

Rarity is still at 22. 

the first one toraly rhymes,i'm actually quite proud on how that one turned out but your post your rules no biggie

[ChB 18,532]

On 6/22/2018 at 5:40 PM, lordvaltasar said:

the first one toraly rhymes,i'm actually quite proud on how that one turned out but your post your rules no biggie

Fair enough. Seek would rhyme with boutique, if you didn't write boutique in plural form. But other than that, you're right. I won't use such a technicality against you.

Rarity is at 23 

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

50 minutes ago, ChB said:

Fair enough. Seek would rhyme with boutique, if you didn't write boutique in plural form. But other than that, you're right. I won't use such a technicality against you.

Rarity is at 23 

boutiques is paired with silks thats why its in plural,while meet is paired with seek,i don't argue for the points don't feel obligated to give them i was just defending my poem

Edited June 24, 2018 by lordvaltasar

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

Twilight once a brother had
before his wedding she tried to brake
lucky for her it's not that bad
since it turns out the bride was fake

Twilight Sparkle 3

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

poor Rainbow dash always seem to miss
sweet apple acres' cider by a hair
to drink it here this chance she takes with bliss
and just this once for winning she won't care

Rainbow Dash 2

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

Oh my, it's nearly been a week,

Our Applejack does more cider seek.

 

Aj=84

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

Taking it easy and

Slowing down the pace.

Applejack's still winning,

This rather sedate race.

 

Aj=85

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

Guess it's time for another post,

Applejack raises her glass to make a toast

 

Aj = 86

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

Five days or one hundred and twenty hours,

Will Aj get a prize for winning perhaps flowers.

Aj=87

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

@Feather Spiral @Longhaul 

i thought you two might like this game
since with rhyming to play is the aim
Rarity will cheer you in this sport
no matter who you happen to support

Rarity 24

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

I believe that the rules state,

That the second and fourth lines are the ones to rhyme.

@ChB is sure to comment and rate,

Although with a brohoof it looks okay this time.

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Our golden girl hopes she's not late,

Applejack swigs back number eighty eight.

Aj=88

 

 

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

Zecora speaks like that for the most part
that was the idea,its not a court
surely that rule is there to help you start
and not to cut our options short
believe me i'm not trying to be smart
like applejack i'm honest i report
these here rules i surely take to heart
if trully it bothers you i won't retort
i will accept it,i'm just here for the art
and the points again i will abort

Applejack: 89

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

If the rules don't match how Zecora speaks,

Then that's a matter for the games creator.

Applejack wonders if the rules need tweaks,

As she'd rather be a drinker than a hater.

Aj = 90

 

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

Rarity feels tipsy and,Oh my!
she throws up all the liquor with a cry

Rarity 25

[Longhaul 6,470]

O Rarity!  Your delicate tum
couldn't hold the booze and made you chum.
'Tis quite all right, for now, you see,
You can start drinking again quite easily.

Rarity 26

[Feather Spiral 1,892]

Yeech... why was I mentioned? some of the rules are so complicated.

So we must write... either in a couplet, or a quatrain with ABAB rhyme? Each valid post adds +1 cider to the character's drink count?

I feel like a word number per verse is a bit superfluous, too. But okay, I'll see what I can come up with.

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

On 7/15/2018 at 3:17 PM, Feather Spiral said:

So we must write... either in a couplet, or a quatrain with ABAB rhyme? 

The ABAB doesn't seem to be followed that hard, I've tended to be XBYB, just making the 2nd & 4th rhyme as per the rulesets

 

 

[ChB 18,532]

1 hour ago, Dawnchaser said:

The ABAB doesn't seem to be followed that hard, I've tended to be XBYB, just making the 2nd & 4th rhyme as per the rulesets

Yes. XBYB is all that’s required, as that’s the way Zecora rhymed.

That said, ABAB and AABB are also acceptable.

[Lord Valtasar 12,685]

Lets try xbyb for once then

 

When the princess told her to find friends

Books came to mind to Twilight Sparkle

Since they are quiet and your peace respect

Unlike those foalish who like to chuckle

 

Twilight Sparkle 4

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,087]

How do Sparkle and chuckle rhyme?

Charcoal sort of rhymes

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4 hours ago, ChB said:

That said, ABAB and AABB are also acceptable.

...now ChB tells us

Edited July 16, 2018 by Dawnchaser

[Feather Spiral 1,892]

I mean, at this point... we're all done, AJ pretty much wins.

She's at 90 drinks thanks to Dawnchaser being really bored, followed by Rarity at an impressive 26 from Valtasar's votes.

Then we got: Twi at 4, Pinkie at 3, Rainbow and Fluttershy at 1.

Lyra and Starlight don't even exist after the original post, apparently.