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Cider Contest 4.0: Haiku Challenge


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3 hours ago, Longhaul said:

"Cutie marks are lame!"
Starlight declares, slamming down
yet another cider.

Starlight Glimmer: 4

 

Sorry. The third line has six syllables. Starlight is still at 3.

 

5 minutes ago, Sherbert Music-Guard said:

Much more cider has
By Twilight, yeah
This is a haiku

Twi=4

No. A Haiku has 5-7-5 syllables. Yours has 5-4-5 syllables.

Twilight is still at 3.

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2 minutes ago, Dawnchaser said:

Full glass of cider. 
Must attack at once. 
Sorry was that yours. :lie:

 

Aj=6

Sorry. The second line has only 5 syllables, when it should be 7.

AJ is still at 5.

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6 minutes ago, ChB said:

Sorry. The second line has only 5 syllables, when it should be 7.

AJ is still at 5.

Fixed

 

Company coming?
And your house is a big mess?
Drink lots of cider.

 

Aj=7

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22 minutes ago, ChB said:

Sorry. The third line has six syllables. Starlight is still at 3.

 

Fixed.

Starlight will not be
shown up by an earth pony
so she drinks some more.

Starlight Glimmer: 5

 

 

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14 minutes ago, Sherbert Music-Guard said:

Twilight is drinking
She is clearly the best
Accept this, all you!

Twi = 4

I suppose you read "clearly" as three syllables, when it's only two. ("Clea-r-ly"?) I'll let this slide for now, but next time, please make sure your second line has 7 syllables.

 

To everypony, if you are unsure how many syllables are in your line, please use this:

https://syllablecounter.net/ 

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I haven't done a haiku in over 2 years, but it's a worth an attempt.

Come on Fluttershy.

Do it for the animals.

Chug like you mean it

 

Fluttershy 1 - Hopefully.

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