[Critique Wanted] My first fanart

[Arkadios 91]

So I’m hand-drawing an adaptation of this scene with the Dazzlings and I have a preliminary sketch of Sonata:

Any suggestions on body shape, proportions or details?

Faces are a beast I’ll deal with later.

(Also, this is my first time attempting to draw a complete picture with human figures, so, if you have any pointers, shout ‘em out.)

Edited November 15, 2018 by Arkadios

[Usager 431]

Not much can be said in a sketch, sketch are used to do the principal draw and fix proportions and such.

Hope to see progress ;3!

[Arkadios 91]

The story so far. Sonata O’Donnell is looking at her gopher like it’s an ice cream taco.