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I'm busy writing a fic witch puts the ponies from the series in a situation echoing that of the Dissidia games. I have a few of the chapters up for test reading and I would love to have some feedback on them.

 

I still intend to make at least one illustration per chapter and add background music, but I'm neither Tetsuya Nomura nor Deadmau5 and it shows, :blush:

if anyone would be willing to help me with either I would be so grateful for that.

 

 


Here's a link to the story

 

Again, please tell me your opinion, even if you think it completely sucks, just tell me what I can do to improve it.

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