critique wanted Very early WIP progress.

[Kitty_Cat 376]

I've just started an artwork of a pony. I literally only have the line of part of the head. I haven't drawn any ponies in ages, and I've only drawn two so far as little sketches for no reason, so they did not come well at all because I didn't care at the time.

It seems okay, but also not. I always end up having this kind of feeling when I draw. Something feels off with the nose area and the top part of the head. I would also like advice for drawing eyes, too. 

[Scilla Bell 103]

It's a great start, but the snout and mouth could be made bigger and maybe moved a bit further down? I redlined it a bit to show you what I mean. (Excuse the roughness I'm on my phone right now)

I wouldn't worry too much about the top of the head since it's going to be covered by hair, but the perceived wonkiness could be that it's a perfect circle. Heads don't tend to be perfect circles. 

As for drawing eyes, I'm not sure how to really explain it, but there are plenty of guides online that can show you how!

Here are two that I found after a quick search:

https://www.deviantart.com/wicklesmack/art/My-Little-Pony-Eyes-Tutorial-304344499

https://www.deviantart.com/frostykat13/art/Digital-MLP-Eye-Tutorial-490483363

All in all, you're very early in the artistic process! Try making it to a complete rough sketch and then people will be able to give more detailed and accurate advice and critiques. Keep it up!

[Kitty_Cat 376]

I know its been a few days but I finally got around to updating it some. Would like critique on the body and the.. half leg lol. She is going to be doing sort of a gentle run.

[They call me Loyalty 1,941]

Something like this? I don't have experience drawing ponies in the show artstyle. And the crappy mouse doesn't help.

 

[Kitty_Cat 376]

Update #3.
What do y'all think?

[Kitty_Cat 376]

Apologies for not saying anything for so long, had exams to do.

What do y'all think of this?

 

[Scilla Bell 103]

It looks great! Keep it up 

[Kitty_Cat 376]

mane, tail, and most of a wing added lol. Will get wing fixed soon enough.

[Props Valroa 26,028]

Lot better than I could do, keep it up!

[Kitty_Cat 376]

Uncertain of the colors. (do ignore the partial circle at top left, that's my mouse lol. it loves getting in the way.)

[Kitty_Cat 376]

Almost there! Just need to accent the hair some, add shadows, and edit in her cutie mark.

[Props Valroa 26,028]

@Kitty_Cat

She looks so cute!

[Kitty_Cat 376]

Fire embedded in tail attempt. liking it, but unsure of actual quality.

[Props Valroa 26,028]

@Kitty_Cat

I love her wings!