A perfect song that I think would fit Cozy Glow

[TheUnknownPhantom5 67]

Outrunning karma, that filly

Shes such a charmer, all the

Bugs and their larva follow

Her out to Canterlot

Ten-dozen hearts in a bag

Their bodies lyin', she'll drag

Them down to Canterlot

A modern desperado

And she'll race for miles through the night

She runs because she knows she cannot hide

She's never gonna make it, all the

Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma

Is always gonna chase her for her lies

It's just a game of waiting from the

Church steeple down to Tartarus karma

There's really no escape until she dies

Outrunning karma, that filly

Can't run no farther, it's the

Last days of Sparta, follow

Her down to meet Apollo

And she'll brace for battle in the night

She'll fight because she knows she cannot hide

She's never gonna make it, all the

Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma

Is always gonna chase her for her lies

It's just a game of waiting from the

Church steeple down to Tarturas karma

There's really no escape until she dies

La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la

La-la-la, la la, la la

La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la

La-la-la, la la, la la

She's never gonna make it, all the

Poor ponies she's forsaken, karma

Is always gonna chase her for her lies

It's just a game of waiting from the

Church steeple down to Tarturas karmaThere's really no escape until she dies

La-la-la, la la, la-la-la, la la

La-la-la, la la, la la

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,809]

Would you like me to critique your lyrics?

[TheUnknownPhantom5 67]

57 minutes ago, Courageous Thunder Dash said:

Would you like me to critique your lyrics?

This isn't my song It's by Alec Benjamin I just made a few changes to the lyrics.

Here's the orignal song that is not by me. 

So no I would not like you to critque my Lyrics because it is not My Song.