My Sister, Loyalty

[Spring Veil 254]

Oh my goodness that was good. You sir, have just acquired a new fan. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

[NavelColt 22,876]

Oh my goodness that was good. You sir, have just acquired a new fan. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

 

Glad you enjoyed it <3 I'm currently working my way through two more short stories, one is a friend fic about Spitfire and Dash, and the other is about Apple Bloom and AJ, which is gonna be similar to this one in terms of one on one sisterly cuteness x3

Edited July 5, 2012 by ~Chaotic Discord~

[WingMcCallister 367]

That was surprisingly well written. It's nice to see a fanfic that is composed well and has the development needed to draw in an audience. Mad entertainment props.

[NavelColt 22,876]

That was surprisingly well written. It's nice to see a fanfic that is composed well and has the development needed to draw in an audience. Mad entertainment props.

 

Thanks :3 Glad you enjoyed it ^^

[WingMcCallister 367]

Thanks :3 Glad you enjoyed it ^^

 

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[Nouth 495]

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Awesome ! Really great, I enjoyed it a lot, we need more dashfics good as this ! I know you're not planning to do a sequel, but are you planning to write anything else about Dashie ? :3

EDIT: NVM, just read your response. Looking forward these new two !

Edited July 10, 2012 by Nouth

[NavelColt 22,876]

Awesome ! Really great, I enjoyed it a lot, we need more dashfics good as this ! I know you're not planning to do a sequel, but are you planning to write anything else about Dashie ? :3

EDIT: NVM, just read your response. Looking forward these new two !

 

Yeah, my inspiration levels are usually dreary </3 But I'm still working on both stories best I can. Glad you enjoyed this one, though

[DashPony 359]

That was VERY well written You captured Dashie's personality and mannerisms flawlessly, and it was full of "DAAAAA'W".

Being a big fan of Dash myself, I loved this story. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you

[NavelColt 22,876]

That was VERY well written You captured Dashie's personality and mannerisms flawlessly, and it was full of "DAAAAA'W".

Being a big fan of Dash myself, I loved this story. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you

 

Thanks for the feedback, and, you can <3 I finished another Scootalove story yesterday. You can read about it here, with the link to the story: http://mlpforums.com/topic/26018-like-sisters/

[DashPony 359]

Thanks for the feedback, and, you can <3 I finished another Scootalove story yesterday. You can read about it here, with the link to the story: http://mlpforums.com...8-like-sisters/

 

Yay! I'll check it out as soon as I get a chance. I'm always on the look out for good fanfics to read

[Derpy Dash 233]

Hopefully one day Scootalove will be canon, but until then, I guess your amazing fanfics will have to do. :3

 

But really, awesome story 9/10

[Charming Knight 56]

Dear, Princess Celestia please please!!! make ~Chatotic Discord~ write more of these!! the feels where strong! and i was so disappointing when it ended there needs to be more!! i know you are reading this... write more... now... or else... ELSE!!!! thank you <3

[NavelColt 22,876]

Dear, Princess Celestia please please!!! make ~Chatotic Discord~ write more of these!! the feels where strong! and i was so disappointing when it ended there needs to be more!! i know you are reading this... write more... now... or else... ELSE!!!! thank you <3

 

'Like Sisters' is more, though not a sequel. And I'm in progress on something that continues off of this :3

[---Princess Cadance--- 1]

i love it awwwwwwwwwww its so cute and its fantastic well done(i love scootaloo too lol) i wish i could do that

[Charming Knight 56]

well it is amazing! and i can not wait to read more!!! =3

[NavelColt 22,876]

As it so happens, a Youtuber has done a reading of this story, as well <3 I only stumbled onto this after typing in the story title into Google, curious if it had traversed the internet at all. To my happy surprise, it has

 

[Acrylic Swirl 3]

Nice story! I really like it! I love the beginning and that Dash has that "sister" Vib to her. And, its a cute story all together, haven't finished it, but I like it so far!

[XUNUSEDXXX 3,459]

As it so happens, a Youtuber has done a reading of this story, as well <3 I only stumbled onto this after typing in the story title into Google, curious if it had traversed the internet at all. To my happy surprise, it has

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6MxxsyuaGA

 

That's pretty epic that someone took the time to read out your beautiful fanfic You well deserved it mate.

 

It's also fun to read the fanfic and compare it to how the show actually played Scootalove out. :3

[Scootalove 10,684]

This story is really good, ~Chaotic Discord~. This really reflects to a good sister relationship, between Dash and Scootaloo.

I really enjoyed reading it, it was worth it.

[NavelColt 22,876]

This story is really good, ~Chaotic Discord~. This really reflects to a good sister relationship, between Dash and Scootaloo.

I really enjoyed reading it, it was worth it.

Glad you enjoyed it so much <3 I've written two other Scootalove stories, if you ever want to check them out as well. One of them is a separate one shot called Like Sisters, the other is a sequel to My Sister, Loyalty, called Sisterhood, Defined. It's only one chapter so far because I'm clueless as hell on where I want to go with it, but it'll continue eventually xD;

[XxConfusedUnicornxX 832]

Why do you have to make me feel like this?!?!