Derpy.H 177 Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Jingle Bells Jingle Bells Jingle All The Way Oh what fun it is to ride in a one pony open sleigh Dashing through the snow In a one pony open sleigh O'er the farms we go Laughing with Pinkie Bells on bob tails ring Making Spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing with Pinkie tonight! Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh A day or two ago I thought I'd take a ride And soon the Mane 6 Was seated in the sleigh The pony was lean and lank Misfortune seemed his lot He got into a drifted bank We laughed alot Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh A day or two ago, The story I must tell I went out on the snow, And on my flank I fell A stally was riding by In a one pony open sleigh, He looked and laughed as did I But then rode away Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh Now the ground is white I got up while I could The mane 6 and I all got back and laughed We rode away And continued to laugh And then we flew away And Blam! Right into the night. Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh Its got a few changes in there you may notice - I made all of this just because it was christmas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apple Bloom 2,901 Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Oh great, another song I have to sing. http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png I changed the lyrics a little bit. Hope you don't mind. Bold is where I made changes. Dashing through the snow In a one pony open sleigh O'er the farms we go Laughing with Pinkie Bells on bob tails ring Making Spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing with Pinkie Pie tonight! Oh! (Chorus) Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way. Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh. (x2) A day or two ago I thought I'd take a ride And soon all the Mane 6 Were seated by my side The colt was lean and lank Misfortune seemed his lot He got into a drifted bank We laughed and laughed a lot Oh! (Chorus x2) A day or two ago, The story I must tell I went out in the snow, And on my flank I fell A stally rode right by In a one pony open sleigh, He looked and laughed and as did I But then he rode away. Oh! (Chorus x2) Now the ground is white I got up while I could The mane 6 and I all got back and laughed We all rode away And continued to laugh And after then we flew away Blam! Right into the night. Oh! (Chorus x2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D1SC0RD 987 Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 I approve of Apple Bloom's edits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Derpy.H 177 Posted December 12, 2011 Author Share Posted December 12, 2011 Oh great, another song I have to sing. http://mlpforums.com/public/style_emoticons/default/dry.png I changed the lyrics a little bit. Hope you don't mind. Bold is where I made changes. Dashing through the snow In a one pony open sleigh O'er the farms we go Laughing with Pinkie Bells on bob tails ring Making Spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing with Pinkie Pie tonight! Oh! (Chorus) Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way. Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one pony open sleigh. (x2) A day or two ago I thought I'd take a ride And soon all the Mane 6 Were seated by my side The colt was lean and lank Misfortune seemed his lot He got into a drifted bank We laughed and laughed a lot Oh! (Chorus x2) A day or two ago, The story I must tell I went out in the snow, And on my flank I fell A stally rode right by In a one pony open sleigh, He looked and laughed and as did I But then he rode away. Oh! (Chorus x2) Now the ground is white I got up while I could The mane 6 and I all got back and laughed We all rode away And continued to laugh And after then we flew away Blam! Right into the night. Oh! (Chorus x2) Yeah, I have to admit - Im not the best lyric maker and your changes just make it better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ezynell 2,034 Posted December 12, 2011 Share Posted December 12, 2011 Need a sound file. This is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Not to be a nitpicker, but many of the stanzas you have do not rhyme, nor have orginality. Then again, it is just nit picking. An example so I do not sound like a negative nancy- Bells on bob tails ring Making Spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing with Pinkie tonight! The second line does not go with the first line, as it ends too early. Another word would work. Again with the last line. It ends too early. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apple Bloom 2,901 Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Not to be a nitpicker, but many of the stanzas you have do not rhyme, nor have orginality. Then again, it is just nit picking. An example so I do not sound like a negative nancy- Bells on bob tails ring Making Spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing with Pinkie tonight! The second line does not go with the first line, as it ends too early. Another word would work. Again with the last line. It ends too early. Um, that second line is like that in the original song so it's not RDD's doing and I noticed that last line and changed it to "with Pinkie Pie tonight!" I agree that it's not completely original though, but he (assuming RDD is a he) did say he's "not the best lyric maker" and I'm not either by any means. I just tried to make it sound better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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