DarkenedPath 1 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Can you give more depth in what you mean by basic premise? just a brief analysis of what the story is about, like the things you read on the back of a book cover, it briefly goes over the plot and identifies the main characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pondus30 152 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 I loved the last chapter! can't wait for the next one!! You told me you didn't have an editor! Anyway, I can honestly say I'm truly jealous of you. You have been able to attract more people on this site to your fanfic then mine while it being Oc, Self insert, and usually worst of all shipping a mane 6 with the self insert. I'm truly stun on how you got more people to like this with those factors in mind. I'm not saying I hate the story, Its a great story. I mean, as long as you stay away from Pinkie Pie when it comes to any shipping with your character I'll be ok. You are truly great at making fanfics. I truly envy you. I would also like to ask one final thing. Do you have any ideas where I can find more pre readers? The one I have suggest I should get more. Where can find your texts? i will gladly read them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Chapter 8 was awesome, now we get some variation of the story. A little action and drama helps the story develop even further than it did in the previous chapters. Nice work there PinkiePie, as I said before: Waiting for the next chapter like a little kid for christmas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pondus30 152 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Chapter 8 was awesome, now we get some variation of the story. A little action and drama helps the story develop even further than it did in the previous chapters. Nice work there PinkiePie, as I said before: Waiting for the next chapter like a little kid for christmas. So true! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 Chapter 8 was awesome, now we get some variation of the story. A little action and drama helps the story develop even further than it did in the previous chapters. Nice work there PinkiePie, as I said before: Waiting for the next chapter like a little kid for christmas. Oh lord trust me, I have some serious stuff planned. Little spoiler c: The entire mane 6 will have a part in this little love hexagon c: New chapter updated c: Come here from now on, Google docs will be for editing. http://poni.0au.de/story/4645/Waking-up-in-a-new-world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Am reading through the new chapter now, will give feedback when done. Oh god I'm excited. I felt goosebumps wash over my body As you wrote in the chapter describes how I felt when reading the last sentence. I can really feel that an amazing story will come of this. Keep doing what you do, no doubt about the success that will come with the continued story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 Am reading through the new chapter now, will give feedback when done. Oh god I'm excited. As you wrote in the chapter describes how I felt when reading the last sentence. I can really feel that an amazing story will come of this. Keep doing what you do, no doubt about the success that will come with the continued story. Thankee c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Thankee c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HomuraBL 848 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Oh lord trust me, I have some serious stuff planned. Little spoiler c: The entire mane 6 will have a part in this little love hexagon c: New chapter updated c: Come here from now on, Google docs will be for editing. http://poni.0au.de/s...-in-a-new-world I just read your spoiler thing...I should hate you for including Pinkie Pie in that but...The story is good enough to kinda overlook. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 New chapter updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 (edited) *Squeel!* Ok, I'm not done reading the new chapter yet but I need to comment on something I've noticed a few times. You need to be aware of who's talking in the story. You sometimes, in the same part of the story, switch from "I felt..." to "He then..." and such. Just wanted to give a heads up on that. I have no idea how to do the spoiler pop-down thingy so: SPOILER ALERT!! " I started to stretch on the bed, when I felt my left arm touch something furry. I greaw very worried, remembering that someone was with HIM on the bed. " The above is just an example. Edited December 21, 2011 by Lamii Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 Lol, it is small errors like that I miss. It is why I have an editor to help me, but he is asleep c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 Amazing chapter. More love drama, the way I love it. As with all the other chapters. I couldn't help but smile the greatest smile of all time, through the whole chapter. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 Amazing chapter. More love drama, the way I love it. As with all the other chapters. I couldn't help but smile the greatest smile of all time, through the whole chapter. Oh you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 I can't wait till AJ get's included in this hexagon of love drama. She's truely my favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 I can't wait till AJ get's included in this hexagon of love drama. She's truely my favorite. Lol, just wait. I have OODLES of fun in store. 'Nother spoiler, just cuz I love you guys. Celestia and Luna will be involved in this. I won't say how though c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 @Spoiler: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 21, 2011 Author Share Posted December 21, 2011 @Spoiler: Oh you shall see <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 21, 2011 Share Posted December 21, 2011 I can not wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Share Posted December 22, 2011 This is an image in progress for the fic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 22, 2011 Share Posted December 22, 2011 Made me shed a tear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Share Posted December 22, 2011 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Essie is Sad 35 Posted December 22, 2011 Share Posted December 22, 2011 very nice and well writen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,277 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Share Posted December 22, 2011 And new chapter updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inkfeather 597 Posted December 22, 2011 Share Posted December 22, 2011 I love you PinkiePie<3 Awesome chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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