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Nicolae Carpathia

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Deep within Suntower is a dark secret. 30 pony's who went inside never came back out. when one mare ventures inside and discovers the truth she must soon to find the way out of Suntower or become the next victim of the tower.

 

 

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It was dark and foggy night at Suntower. The screams of the lost seemed to echo throughout the night. Fleur, a young unicorn, tried to convince everypony that the tale of the Ghost of Lord Midnight Death was real, for the night before over 30 ponies had died with no known cause.

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She nervously approached Forbidden Forest which was the only thing blocking her way to Suntower. As she walked she grew more aware that she wasn't alone."Okay...this is getting scary..." Fleur said, as though she was in her worst nightmare.

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She nervously approached Forbidden Forest which was the only thing blocking her way to Suntower. As she walked she grew more aware that she wasn't alone."Okay...this is getting scary..." Fleur said, as though she was in her worst nightmare.

 

a voice came from behind her , it was a childs voice." He's watching us.
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Fleur jumped around and saw nothing,,,"What? Okay...maybe I'm just hearing things," Fleur said to herself.

 

it was getting dark in the forest the voices seemed to grow louder as she was getting near to suntower. Edited by King_Mornki
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She felt as though she started sinking with every step."Wait a miniute..." She stopped and examind the ground...

 

she was in quick sand. just before she went under she saw a shadowy figure pull her out. Edited by King_Mornki
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"Wha-who are you?" She saw that the figure had start to approach her.

 

It seemed to be a stallion he looked at her and vanished but before her stood Suntower. Edited by King_Mornki
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