Becoming Chaos (Fic)

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Ah, Octavia's Hall. The one place I have yet to plunder with posts and topics. It smells so new and fresh to me.

 

Anyway, I am here to shamelessly advertise my fanfiction, named Becoming Chaos.

 

Now, brace yourselves, its a HiE but don't run, not yet at least. It has a twist that has seemed to have gone down well with a lot of people, earning a decent number of favourites/ likes/ comments in around one day so I thought "Why the hell not post it here?"

 

Here is the link to my story (beware, it can get dark but there is no actual gore):

 

http://www.fimfictio.../Becoming-Chaos

 

I'd like to ask for any advice or constructive criticisms you guys have for me because, whilst this is not my first fanfiction it is only my fourth, the other couple doing relatively well.

 

Well, enjoy I hope.

 

P.S No, the main character will not turn into a bloody Alicorn.