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From what I have read and thanks to you helpful relpy, I believe I understood what you try to do, let me put it into your language.

 

Sorien ,s not exhistnt. T'name is Soarin. And b,tway what,s a cap? Like a basebal cap? And duuhde if you wanna need help, yu shuld definitaly tell us moar.

 

 

No really, I don't want to be mean or anything but that is a pain to read. I'm not quite sure I could read a Fan Fiction that is written in such a way. And besides it does not seem you have put quite that much effort into telling what exactly is going on?

 

So you would 'play' Spitfire, so my guess is that you want others to fill the roles of Soarin and any other members of the team. Where as the plot... where does it start? Is Spitfire already somewhere? Does she know Soarin? Are they friends? Perhaps they discover their love for flying together? The show is not specific about it so you could imagine anything you want actually. Good luck though on this.

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part 2

narrator: in the last ep

¿?: next

spitfire: is my turn

narrator: and now

¿?: name

spitfire: spitfire

¿?: gender

spitfire: female

¿?: age

spitfire: that is a secret

¿?. i,m sorien i will loking for you entrance exam for the wonder bolts

spitfire: ok

sorien: ok let's get started 1 question.

what is most important in wonder bolts

a) the fans

B) the show

c) the fame

d) the money

now anser

spitfire: ... b?

sorien: that is correct.

next

which is the motto of the bolts wonder?

spitfire: never give up

sorien: good

and finally

which is the symbol of the wonder bolts

spitfire: a thunder?

sorien: is correct nice too meet you

we´re going to send you a message to tell you if your in ok?

spitfire: ok

" in her mind"I did it

end of the 1 th ep

 

ep 2 the first show

spitfire i can,t wait more sure they whaven`t select me

" a card falls"

spitfire: must be they

" read"

sorien: dear spitfire well done you have selected to be a wonder bolt please don not disappoint us signed sorien

spitfire: yea i pass " dance" wait is more

sorien: your 1 th show is this afternoon please come quickly

spitfire: what time is it " look the clock" ! i late

" music of sonic x"

spitfire: i,m here ... " catching her breath"

sorien: your here

spitfire: i,m sorry

sorien: your,not late don,t be sorry

spitfire: " look aguin the cloak" what " have left 5 min" my clock i not correct " disappoint"

sorien: be redy

spitfire: ok

to be continue

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