What Lies Within

[Bendy 1,819]

Contains minor gore details: Rating: Teen.

 

Pinkie Pie on the way back from visiting Applejack finds a mysterious box.

 

The fan fiction is on fimfiction.net: What Lies Within

 

Promo Picture below:

 

Edited July 19, 2012 by Rush

[GrooveBroove 680]

I'll give this a read soon and let you know what I think!

[Bendy 1,819]

I'll give this a read soon and let you know what I think!

 

Thanks! As long as you give me constructive criticism and don't blatantly insult me, I''ll be fine with your feedback.

Edited July 18, 2012 by Rush

[GrooveBroove 680]

Thanks! As long as you give me constructive criticism and don't blatantly insult me, I''ll be fine with your feedback.

 

Constructive criticism is what im all about.

You get nothing from insults.

[Zerul 554]

Why is pinkie always the one in gore fictions :/

[Bendy 1,819]

Constructive criticism is what im all about.

You get nothing from insults.

 

Ah very good. I look forward to hearing your feedback.

 

Why is pinkie always the one in gore fictions :/

 

Don't worry, it's not like Cupcakes.

[GrooveBroove 680]

Got done reading it.

Gotta say I liked it, especially the humor concerning Pinkie Pie.

You completely naile it there, especially the part where she's walking like a human.

Priceless.

[Thyflesh 35]

Why is pinkie always the one in gore fictions :/

 

It's only natural for best pony.....

[Bendy 1,819]

Got done reading it.

Gotta say I liked it, especially the humor concerning Pinkie Pie.

You completely naile it there, especially the part where she's walking like a human.

Priceless.

 

Glad you enjoyed it. You should see my other fan fiction Magical Shiny Land.

 

It's only natural for best pony.....

 

All Ponies Are Best Pony!

 

Edit: I edited my first post to add the Promo Picture. I forgot to post it the first time.

 

Edited July 19, 2012 by Rush