My OC Vector/Avatar

[Shiki 5,855]

Alright, so since this is a pony forum, I decided to go from being Chiaki to Sugar Plum, which is my OC. I figured, hey, may as well draw a nice avatar for myself, right? So, well, I did, and I'd like some feedback on it. I'd like it if anyone could point out some flaws that I missed. You know, stupid things like incorrect layering and whatnot.

 

I think I made her look a bit chubby... But that might just be the cropping, because I didn't draw a full body picture, because I'm lazy!

 

I totally redrew her, and now I think she actually looks good.

 

 

Before.

 

After.

 

 

Also, if you want to check out my OC, here's a link. http://mlpforums.com...ugar-plum-r1310

Edited August 8, 2012 by Sugar Plum

[Azura 1,107]

Her ear could be a little bit higher and sharper and she's missing her neck or maybe that's how fillies look..

 

Overall it looks great and I'd rate it 8/10!

Edited August 8, 2012 by Cloud Chaser

[Shiki 5,855]

Her ear could be a little bit higher and sharper and her neck looks a bit too thick.

 

Overall it looks great and I'd rate it 8/10!

 

Thanks for the feedback. I kind of saw what you meant about the ear whenever the image shrinked down to avatar size. Everything always looks better at full-size while drawing it.

[Azura 1,107]

Thanks for the feedback. I kind of saw what you meant about the ear whenever the image shrinked down to avatar size. Everything always looks better at full-size while drawing it.

 

No no, it looks great. Don't worry, you'll improve in no time.

 

Sadly I am no artist but I'd like to learn how to draw ponies one day..