My first fanfic--The Shadowed Nightmare

[Night Shine 767]

Hey everypony!

 

I finished the first part of my first fanfic ever, The Shadowed Nightmare. :3

 

 

A quick summary/description/whatever:

Fluttershy's pleasant dream is transfigured into a horrible nightmare, and nopony sees her the next day. A book about dream magic is stolen from Twilight's house. One of the Mysterious Mare Do Well costumes Rarity kept goes missing. The hot-air balloon has been taken. All of this in a single night, and it all revolves around one mysterious pony who then breaks into the Canterlot Library. What is happening?

Why is this pony doing all of it under the cover of darkness? Whatever the reason, Twilight Sparkle is determined to find out.

Author's Note: Story is written in a format as if it is the script of an actual episode.

 

 

The story is here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/47635/The-Shadowed-Nightmare

 

What do you all think?

 

EDIT 9/22/12

 

Finally done! thought i might let you all know.

 

Anyway, now I'm going to write a sequel about the Elements of Disharmony--"The Elements of Disharmony: Necessary Corruption".

I mean, that is, if you all want one.

 

Would you all be interested in that?...

Edited September 23, 2012 by Night Shine