I started to doodle today...

[EileenRose92 9]

I know the ponies are not the best nor ar they in color... and I know Rarity's head is a bit small (shouldn't it be a bit tho (: ) Anyways, I just wanted to share and see how bad people thought my sketches were. Personally, for my first time ever trying to draw a pony, I think I did pretty good. Also, I had to include the G1 for old time's sake.

 

ER92

[Standard User 2,127]

Approximately a hundred times better than anything I could ever hope to sketch.

 

I like the cocky grin on Rainbow's face! Definitely fits the character. Her body is a little misshapen, however. Just that and Rarity's head are the only real "problems" I can find.

 

Oh, and what in the blue blazes is that contraption in the lower left corner?!

[EileenRose92 9]

Kolth,

 

I agree, I tried to get her body right like fifty times... I had my video paused and was even trying to reference the shot I wanted to get of her, but, alas, her I-am-the-coolest pose is a bit beynd me still.

[AnonBrony 1,469]

Thats a doodle? THATS the first time you ever drew pony? Dear lord man who said that was BAD!? Thats a helluvalot better than me hahaha! Maybe if u keep praticing u could get better.

[EileenRose92 9]

Thank you Ace. I will keep doodling on my study breaks; I just hope next time my studying will take up more time than my doodling.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,354]

They look good, very good for a first time. Though from the look of them, you just copied the poses they were in. If you want to improve, I'd suggest learning to draw your own poses (read: learn the anatomy), it takes a while to get right, but the payoff is well worth it.

[EileenRose92 9]

Yeah, I figured I'd just give it a whirl first. But I do have the anatomy sketches from a few different FIM artists. I am hoping to try that out after my exam is over.

[astroty 26]

miss, I can tell you for sure that you had a very good start

anyway, let me start my full review:

 

proportions: the body is almost aways right, but there are sometimes problems with the head's size, you make then with the same size, causing sometimes a small head (your rarity). (though it can be hard to note sometimes, like with fluttershy)

I guess that RD wasn't that worked like the rest of those, but even though her face was drawn the right way, the body was very strange (wings included), there is a fault of a neck.

 

shape:these shapes are pretty well made

 

for your first time, you made a pretty awesome job

[Vinyl Scratch (Filly)™ 936]

D: I am sorry but your sketches are NOT bad!!! They are very good I like them (except the older gen pony there xD though it's also well drawn I just don't like the older generations xD) keep up the work. In time you will improve :3 practice makes perfect, just remember that my friend

[EileenRose92 9]

Thank you everypony for your advice and critical eyes! My studies have gotten crazy, so I haven't had much time to draw, but every time I watch an episode there is always something I'd like to try. Merry early Christmas to everypony!

[Jghx5 33]

It looks, FABULOUS!!!  Really it looks great!  Seems odd with the one random off pony in the bottom left and applebloom but it still looks great none the less mate.  colored or not.

[RainbowDashie 767]

That is really awesome, i myself peticularry like the Applejack and the Fluttershy you drew, i see the Rainbow Dash could have some improvements because it's not very smooth, but overall, very good job. Keep it up!