My OC sketch

[Morager 149]

i had some free time finally so i did a quick sketch of the oc ive been trying to make. i have another pic done and another started but i plan to post them when i finish them and his background story. srry for not being on a lot lately, been busy and havnt had time to do some drawings but i hope to release more soon. i hope everypony likes it, as usual let me know what i can do to make it better. ty p.s. im planing to get a new phone soon so ill have better pics, one without dots on the lens.

[MelancholicMemory 2,027]

Not bad.

 

Here are some points of improvement:

You might want to shorten the snout/ nose, and make the lines of the snout less angular. Make the lines curve a little bit so it seems like they naturally lead into one another. Also, the neck seems kind of odd, and I can tell that there is something strange about the eyes, but I don't know exactly what .

 

It's not too bad here, but you might want to think about finding better lighting when taking pictures of your drawing. I use the same method for getting my art onto my computer so I've had some experience with this.

 

He seems like a pretty cool OC. I can't wait to hear more about him.

[MorningFlash 214]

not bad my friend, not bad, I'm sure it'll look awesome once it gets put into the computer and coloured ^^ Decided on a name for it yet?

[Brook 663]

I like it, and I don't even see any flaws with it, which is really impressive for my standards. It looks really nice man.

 

Good work Moragar, you deserve a royal brohoof /}

[Morager 149]

Not bad.

 

Here are some points of improvement:

You might want to shorten the snout/ nose, and make the lines of the snout less angular. Make the lines curve a little bit so it seems like they naturally lead into one another. Also, the neck seems kind of odd, and I can tell that there is something strange about the eyes, but I don't know exactly what .

 

It's not too bad here, but you might want to think about finding better lighting when taking pictures of your drawing. I use the same method for getting my art onto my computer so I've had some experience with this.

 

He seems like a pretty cool OC. I can't wait to hear more about him.

 

yea i thought the snout was a little of ill have to try to adjust with my next drawing and the i eyes i believe are to rounded, needs to be a little more oval and darker around them. ty i hope to have more on him soon

not bad my friend, not bad, I'm sure it'll look awesome once it gets put into the computer and coloured ^^ Decided on a name for it yet?

 

thank you.i plan on doing a color pic just not with a computer im old fashion like that lol i think the name im going for is steel shield but still deciding

I like it, and I don't even see any flaws with it, which is really impressive for my standards. It looks really nice man.

 

Good work Moragar, you deserve a royal brohoof /}

 

lol thanks im glad you like it {\

[Dusty Soul 2,614]

Not bad, though the snout is a little large. Also the neck is a little small. Overall it's pretty good, but those are things to work on.