A Dark Day In Ponyville

[BronyPower 14]

Chapter 1
A Rude Awakening

 

Its just a regular, peaceful day in Ponyville. The birds are chirping, the sun is shining, not a cloud in the sky...But wait! Where is everypony? No pony's at sweet apple acre, or anywhere else in town! No pony's even at Twilight's... wait there's Twilight now, and she's sleeping. Wait why is she the only one here, not even Spike is here!

 

Twilight:-Yawn-

 

Oh wait! She's waking up!

 

Twilight:Spike? -Yawn- Hey Spike? What... -Yawn- time is it?

 

There's no answer.

 

Twilight:Spike? Where are you? You better not be trying to scare me again!

 

She walks around, searching every nook and cranny, and yet no Spike

 

Twilight:Where is he? Maybe some other pony has seen him...

 

She walks outside to find that no pony's there.

 

Twilight:Where is everypony? It's like a ghost town.

 

She starts walking around yelling "hellooo? Is anypony here?" with no luck. She looks everywhere just to run into Rainbow Dash

 

Rainbow Dash:Hey I finally found someone! Weird how were the only ones here.

 

Apple Jack: I wouldn't be so sure 'bout that.

 

Twilight:Apple Jack! Good your here, too.

 

Rainbow Dash:I wonder who else is here.

 

Pinkie:Yeah! Who else is here.

 

A.J.: Pinkie!

 

Pinkie:Hey, have you all noticed that everypony is gone?

 

Rarity:Yes, I have noticed that.

 

Rainbow Dash:Rarity,Pinkie,Twilight,A.J.,and me. Are we missing anypony else?

 

Twilight:Well seeing the pattern here I think we maybe the only pony's here. But just in case we should go to Camalot and see if Princess Celestia and Luna are still there. I just hope there alright...

 

End of Chapter 1

Chapter 2 coming soon.

Please comment.

 

[XrosOver 613]

Is this a FIc chapter? The concept is alright but the content is extremely lacking. This is barely any words but this would be interesting in greater detail.

[BronyPower 14]

Is this a FIc chapter? The concept is alright but the content is extremely lacking. This is barely any words but this would be interesting in greater detail.

This is just a rough draft. i just need to know what it needs. I know it's bad but can you just tell me ideas or something i need to add or subtract? Thx