writing Life worth dying for

[Ferret Girl 2,642]

I am alive

And dying

 

Living a life that is not mine

And failing to understand why

 

If only someone would stand here beside me

Comfort me and give me a reason

 

Its all I ever wanted

A life worth dying for

And someone worth trying for

Yet im stuck in this paradox of the mind

Left in this void of thoughts

Amongst all the broken memories

 

It seems like lifeis so very pointless

With nothing standing between you and your own

Suicide runs rampant

 

Central points of view

Scattered

Clinging

Watching

Never faltering

 

Stuck in this void again

This abyss of shattered hearts

With lonely bliss

And my own mind

 

 

-David Favret

Edited January 7, 2013 by TheBronyHeart

[MelancholicMemory 2,027]

Well, it's well written as always, and I certainly can relate to it because I've felt this way many times before. Without a sense of meaning, life can feel completely hopeless. If you feel this way, I hope things get better, David.

[VladmireV.S.(Crank) 1,096]

I am glad to see another one of your master pieces feather, I was getting kinda depressed that there was no good poetry on here..... but seriously bro, this stuff is deep! keep up the good work mate

 

 

Edited January 7, 2013 by Fluffninja :D