[Fanfic] Collection of "What if..." short stories (feedback wanted)

[Kaidan 16]

Hello Everypony,

 

I'm looking for feedback and any advice as I am a new writer. I've written about 5 short stories 2-3k words each.

 

The link below is to the 5 "What if...." scenario short stories. Let me know which you like, what worked and what didn't.

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/77156/what-if-short-stories

 

 

Thanks in advance for any feedback,

 

*sets Fluttershy to maximum* even if you say it's the most horrible thing ever at least I know you cared enough to read it <3

Edited January 24, 2013 by Kaidan