everything falls apart

[Fanglore 141]

its funny how fast everything you work so had for can fall apart. this is a fallen star after he runs away from ponyville and hides in the everfree

[Friendship_Cannon 1,677]

Good drawing, nice OC...

the point of this piece of art is quite clear, I hope this doesn´t relate to any tragedy/ bad thing that happened to you recently...

If so, I hope you have someone to talk to about it, if not I´m still interested in the backstory of your OC, if there is anything causing this really depressive drawing.

[Fanglore 141]

Good drawing, nice OC...

the point of this piece of art is quite clear, I hope this doesn´t relate to any tragedy/ bad thing that happened to you recently...

If so, I hope you have someone to talk to about it, if not I´m still interested in the backstory of your OC, if there is anything causing this really depressive drawing.

thank you for that. im glade the feelings in this got though. 

thx for the support but nothing bad has happened to me. in all honesty the reason for this sad pic is that my brother said that i never do sad. so i did sad    

[Rainbow Dash Loyalty 1,275]

Nicely done job mate! It's well-drawn and has an emotional feel to it, very nice c: Keep up the good work, and wish you the best of luck in your future work.

[Night Shine 772]

The artistry is very impressive. I especially like the glow effects and shading; also the OC and background are both flawlessly drawn. Nice job!

 

By the way. ERMAHGERD STARS! I LOVE STARS

[Fanglore 141]

Nicely done job mate! It's well-drawn and has an emotional feel to it, very nice c: Keep up the good work, and wish you the best of luck in your future work.

thank you and i hope to have more up soon ii hope that you will come look at the new ones whenever i finish them or in other words when i find the time to finish them

 

The artistry is very impressive. I especially like the glow effects and shading; also the OC and background are both flawlessly drawn. Nice job!

 

By the way. ERMAHGERD STARS! I LOVE STARS

i dont know if i would say flawless but thank you i tried really hard on the glow. i knew that if i wanted the light to look good i had to get that part right. 

 

by the way ERMAHGERD me too

[TailsIsNotAlone 3,696]

This is a pretty good picture. It does have its problems: basically, your pony looks too much like a human. His legs are too big, the flank isn't well shaped, and his front hooves are too long and bend like human arms.

 

The pony's head looks okay and I like the shading on his coat. His horn is too long, too sharp and sticks out at a rather low angle. The background is very simple, but looks OK. This OC has plenty of potential though, and I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future--maybe with a more sophisticated drawing program. What did you use BTW?

[Fanglore 141]

This is a pretty good picture. It does have its problems: basically, your pony looks too much like a human. His legs are too big, the flank isn't well shaped, and his front hooves are too long and bend like human arms.

 

The pony's head looks okay and I like the shading on his coat. His horn is too long, too sharp and sticks out at a rather low angle. The background is very simple, but looks OK. This OC has plenty of potential though, and I look forward to seeing what you can do in the future--maybe with a more sophisticated drawing program. What did you use BTW?

thanks for all the help. ill keep it in mind as i work on my next one

 

on the shaping of him ya i know he looks front hooves are long but i couldn't get it to look right with them shorter and the flank i didn't even notice until i was done and gonna post it. well i was putting it on my computer my brother said it looked off to him as well.

ya the backgrounds plain but i'm just starting to work with them so i got to say i think i did good for how few i have done.

 

i'm using auto desk sketch book pro 6. i know i'm just breaking into what the program will do and i hope to put up something real good soon

 

btw thank you for the critic. i for one love it when people spend the time to look at my work and tell me how to improve