I could use some help Edit/Reader

[Argumedies 1,747]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2527/call-of-cutie-zombie-ponies

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7207187/1/Call-of-Cutie-Zombie-Ponies

 

I am looking for someone to assist me with a quick assessment reading or even
editing.
 

This is a short story that is an indirect cross fiction between FIM and the Call of
Duty Zombie games. you do not need to be a player of the game but it would help
in understanding it.
 

I’m trying to get this ready to submit to EQD and i would appreciate an extra set
of eyeballs on it and any kind of review good or bad will be useful.

 

 

Edited February 24, 2013 by Argumedies