Inkfeather 597 January 30, 2012 Share January 30, 2012 Anticipation. Building slowly. Tension getting bigger. Nearing the breaking point. Stretching further and further out. The bulging surface of happiness, peaking. Breaking the bond so cleanly. Every emotion flows free. Feelings rushing out. Streaming tears. Joy. Now now, I know it's short. Note the numbers of words in every sentence, it's meant to be short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectRKA 2,840 January 30, 2012 Share January 30, 2012 I can't give much feedback other than this is very well written. Good job, Lamii 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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