DerpyTheMessenger's OC (a lot of work)

[Blaaaze 100]

Soo..I've had 3 or 4 hours of work(I lost 1 hour just because I'm stupid) And..I can still see it's not so perfect, but i kinda like the outcome!

2 little notes for Dearest DerptTheMessenger:

1 - I'm bad at drawing headphones(sry for cutiemarkD:) 

2 - i Kinda threw away the idea of the hoodie(if you need it i can redo this 1 layer and add a hoodie, but I think that;s better this way)

Oh ye, I didn't create this OC I just give these ponies this look! This OC belongs to DerpyTheMessenger

 

Leave your feedbacks below, any criticism is welcome, and if you like my drawings and want me to draw your OC feel free to ask and I will see what I can do

 

[Doctor-Whooves 288]

Another great piece.

 

Critic time!

 

Pros:

Eyes are very well done.

The shading from the moon is fantastic.

Well proportioned

 

Cons:

The left legs of the pony on the left are a bit small and look rather deformed...

Both ponies look a bit chubby.

If you're trying to make this semi-show accurate, the outlines are more clearly defined.

The tails look rather out of place and 2 dimensional.

 

 

I look forward to seeing more from you.

[Blaaaze 100]

Another great piece.

 

Critic time!

 

Pros:

Eyes are very well done.

The shading from the moon is fantastic.

Well proportioned

 

Cons:

The left legs of the pony on the left are a bit small and look rather deformed...

Both ponies look a bit chubby.

If you're trying to make this semi-show accurate, the outlines are more clearly defined.

The tails look rather out of place and 2 dimensional.

 

 

I look forward to seeing more from you.

Tnanks^^ Eyes is something i learned to draw first!) About those cons..i think the most critical one is shadows) I was trying to give them this awesome anime look) so I guess a little edgy lines is not that big of a deal) 

Yes those legs..rear legs is my nightmare really)  i know the anatomy, but yet I can't draw rear legs( 

 

I guess some shading would help out with the tails..) It's my first background with clearly defined structure an source of light..and I messed up)

 

Thanks for your feedback, always on my way to improvement, and you have a wonderfull day^^