Derpy Drops the Bass

[CamRad18 337]

Hey guys! This is a a request I did for someone a few days back. It's already in my request topic, but I figured I'd make a separate topic for all ya'll to look at this piece specifically.

 

Let the criticism pour forth! (and I'm terribly sorry the picture is so large.)

[Batbrony 15,994]

Very nice, great sketch all around!!!  Would love to see a colored version of this, but it's still fantastic as it is!  Great job CamRad18! 

[CamRad18 337]

Very nice, great sketch all around!!!  Would love to see a colored version of this, but it's still fantastic as it is!  Great job CamRad18! 

Thanks for the compliment! I thought about coloring it but I was afraid that I might smudge the pencil lead and ruin the whole thing.

[Spit-Fire 19]

Omg I love it, both ponies are so perfectly drawn and I love the whole idea. Are you gonna colour it maybe? If not I still like it as it is.

[GeekBrony 85]

Awesome picture! I also would like this pic colored! Also, you should scan this so that the picture would be easier to see. Good luck!

[Rainblow H. Ash 5,090]

Wow, very nice work on this picture! Wonder if Vinyl Scratch will be mad that Derpy is messing with her equipment...

 

I also agree with the general sentiment that it would be awesome if there was a colored version, but only do it if you want. I think 86cam's idea of scanning it is a good idea, it will be a whole lot clearer then, although I suppose that's only possible if you have access to a scanner.

[Milk Wave 454]

Ahha, derpu doesnt know what's going on.

I love this drawing a lot, considering the fact that im a total diehard basshead and that that derpy~

There is one thing you missed though. The fact that the subs arent pushing outward to produce that violent air that should be coming from it doesnt make it look too much like the other pony is going backwards. Other then that though everything's fine.

Edited March 19, 2013 by Moon Wave

[Kittykittyvii 28]

You can scan it and then color it on an editing program, this is what I do with most of my drawings. That way you can keep the original sketch without "wrecking" it.

[Stormy Shock 28]

Hey guys! This is a a request I did for someone a few days back. It's already in my request topic, but I figured I'd make a separate topic for all ya'll to look at this piece specifically.

 

Let the criticism pour forth! (and I'm terribly sorry the picture is so large.)

Critize all you get from me is...Its awesome i think its preaty funny too.I love derpy and shes just doing her job of making me smile like pinkie.

[WinterFreeze 23]

I love this photo is is funny and cool and derpy is cool as well and it is funny to see her do this and she like "what is happening" it is funny

[Virulence 254]

That is awesome. I love all the detail. Derpy is the funniest out of all. Very nice work. Keep up the drawing there and I look forward to seeing another.

[Silverwisp the Bard 2,353]

It looks pretty good, anatomy is close to the show.

Only thing I'd change is the colt's eye, so it won't touch the outline of the mouth.

Also, depending on what expression you were going for, maybe make pupil and iris smaller, to indicate shock.