Finesthour 7,284 February 8, 2012 Share February 8, 2012 I wrote this in Algerbra... _________________________________ The ignorance in my heart has been reaveled, extreme paranoia plauging my mind. My heart may beat for you, but fear runs with it. With the paraoia enfusing its self in my mind, thoughts of pain come with it. Your voice says you love me, yet my mind drifts to dark thoughts. I see you in my mind ripping my heart to shreds, yet you are the person who fixed it. The fear of my heart breaking once again brings me to tears, but I never want to leave you. I want to be with you forever, but I am truly scared. I trust you with all of my heart, but I never want to lose you. For it is not you I am afraid of, but the fear of pain its self. The stupid mistake that occured is regretted, as I wanted to wait for a special time. Alas, the chance of that happening has long vanished, leaving me with uncertainty. As I wait to hear your sweet voice again, I also fear it's soothing touch. For if you drop me out of your life, I will be plunged into despair. No other words can be said than... I love you. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lunatic 1,185 February 8, 2012 Share February 8, 2012 i think its beutifull. how you wrote that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninja Derpy 343 February 8, 2012 Share February 8, 2012 Wow... I can't beleive how beautiful that is....I can't even....Just, Wow... I wish I could write poetry like you....That is so deep. I can't beleive how lucky your lover is. I am absolutely astonished. You keep writing. I wrote this and that in white to show you how empty my life is, and how fulfilled yours is.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HanPolo 150 February 8, 2012 Share February 8, 2012 Thats pretty beautiful... Reminds me of an old relationship Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,284 February 8, 2012 Author Share February 8, 2012 Well, fuck. Did not expect this reaction. I wonder what she will think of this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crimson Sky 104 February 8, 2012 Share February 8, 2012 I can relate to this well. Unfortunately, i write my best poetry depressed.. so i cannot hope to write like this at all, but maybe if stuff goes down the drain, then i could possibly match poetic wits with you. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finesthour 7,284 February 8, 2012 Author Share February 8, 2012 I can relate to this well. Unfortunately, i write my best poetry depressed.. so i cannot hope to write like this at all, but maybe if stuff goes down the drain, then i could possibly match poetic wits with you. ^^ I write when I have any emotion really. This one is just paranoia. I only have one depression poem, and it is this- Two Paths of Fate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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