writing Story feedback?

[OniPony 1]

I'm not sure if this is the right place for this, but I have been writing and desperately need someone to read my stuff. I am 12 pages into writing a new story and haven't had any feedback yet. I'm writing in kind of a new style, so I would like feedback every few pages to make sure what I'm doing is good. I can't find anyone to read it, so I was hoping one of you guys wouldn't mind checking it out for me? Shoot me a message if you feel up to reading, and I'll send you a link to my dA account where you can find chapter 1 (the first 6 pages).

Edited February 12, 2012 by Feld0
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[Simcity11100 770]

May I read it, but then again, I have to go to bed soon.