Check out my First Fan Fiction ever. (please)

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Hey guys. I've finally uploaded the first few chapters of my first ever fan fiction. I call it 'First Contact'. It's about 4 humans (wait for it) who are sent to the planet Epona to investigate intelligent life but things take a turn for the crazy once they discover said intelligent life is in the form of fairy tales.

 

This story contains some lovecraftian elements with a bit of humour. The first chapters are not very well written compared to the rest but it'll get better. I consider this to also be a fix fic of how humans should react to finding out that a planet full of mythical creature's that have similar customs to them exist. Many other HiE's just drop the subject and let the human accept it.

 

At first my human OCs will seem pretty immature and like stereotypical commandos but later on, you'll see there's more to them than just killing. Much more.

 

This story will also focus on the theme of "humans vs ponies" in a political, ideological and cultural sense once things get rolling.

 

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/110997/first-contact

 

Please be constructive in your criticism. If things are that bad, I'll rewrite.